Sleep Tight (Seeking Greenlight)

Summary:

Seeking Greenlight: Yes

Sleep Tight (Seeking Greenlight)

HeyLittleSparta 03 Dec 2020 23:34

Seeking Greenlight: Yes Page Type: SCP Article This SCP is based part on my fear of spending eternity somewhere tortuous and others' fear of the dark/sleep paralysis. It is a blanket that when used to sleep summons a ghost-like figure who covers you with the blanket, causing you to disappear and causing everyone around you to experience your same nightmares and fears. I think it is mostly done, but I feel the testing section might need some work. Any feedback is much appreciated. If I'm breaking any rules or doing something wrong, let me know. Thanks.

I moved and trimmed your thread summary, since it was taking up a lot of space in the main forum screen. Try to keep thread descriptions (the text in the little box under the thread title) short so you don't crowd out other authors in the forum listing. ~Zyn

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Last edited on 04 Dec 2020 02:15 by Zyn Show more

Re: Sleep Tight (Seeking Greenlight)

(account deleted) 04 Dec 2020 01:41

That's not how you post a greenlight seeking a thread, you can't include Object Class or Item number, and your words exceed 400. You are only allowed to write a greenlight thread with 400 words.

Admin Post - Disciplinary - Closed

Zyn 04 Dec 2020 02:20

GodlyUser does not match any existing user name, you have already been addressed by staff multiple times, including an official warning, for providing inaccurate information in an overauthoritative manner. Your site membership is now revoked.

Author, please note that the above information is not quite accurate—if you like, you may include the object class pertaining to an SCP article concept, and you may also include the desired item number. Your formatting, however, should be solely the concept template and not a full draft. The 400 wordcount limit applies to the last four section of the template, not the entirety of the post.

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KaraKatt 04 Dec 2020 01:57

Author,

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