Form 5118-E: Proposal for Reclassification / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page Form 5118-E: Proposal for Reclassification.

deathbygin 26 Nov 2020 21:43

This is my tale expansion for my authored SCP-5118 to provoke some thoughts. Special thanks to 'Savan' in the IRC for exceptional crit. Sorry if I missed something when posting; it's my first time posting a tale.

Spoiler

Human reality bender turns self into dog?
Or dog turns human to enjoy human things and turns back into a dog when it's about to be caught?

Image from Creative Commons.
https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/4/49/Happy-afternoon-golden-retriever-yoko_%2824326853815%29.jpg

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Savanac 25 Dec 2020 00:32

Glad to know I helped a bit. The tale certainly turned out well and I can't wait to read/crit more of your works.

Have a lovely day deathbygin!

Staff Post - Tech Team - Open

stormbreath 26 Nov 2020 22:38

I renamed this page from form-5118:e-proposal-for-reclassification to form-5118-e-proposal-for-reclassification. This is because Wikidot categorizes pages with a colon in the url as being put into a specific category, which inhibits multiple areas of the site's function.

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can I get some nice "no signatures on my forum"
sigma-9 css machine broke
understandable have a nice day

Yossipossi 27 Nov 2020 00:40

Clever.

WizzBlizz 27 Nov 2020 14:46

Very very cute. Expanded an SCP I already enjoy into something even better. Some things:

+ Open

but it seems to like the name… Saying it gets its attention.

Feels awkward. I say change to:

but it seems to like the name… Say Goldie, and you're guaranteed to get its attention.

That's odd to say the least… Previous containment of humanoids have almost always been followed-up on by addressing a missing persons report.

Again, feels a bit awkward. I suggest:

That's odd to say the least… Normally containment of humanoids leads to dealing with some missing person report.

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Naepic 28 Nov 2020 17:42

The link provided only led to the image itself. A better link is this, which confirms that the image is released under CC 0.

sachiel187 09 Dec 2020 04:47

though i absolutely love both 5118 and this, i don't know why this needs to be on a separate page. that ending is enough of a wham moment, and the wiki is good with longer form content. they could absolutely be one article. but that's just my opinion. both are still worth the +1 from me.

MetalRavioli 21 Jan 2021 16:40

+1 on both of them, loved this story