thank you to KaraKatt, Grigori Karpin, Sonderance, PlaguePJP, HunterDog and all the other critters, authors and users who read over this and gave me critique. we'll see how it goes!
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Hey author,
If you're looking to change the name of your SCP, please change it in the Series 6 Hub and not in the title.
Thank you!
thank you i was just trying to figure out how to do that
Novote for now because while I think it's a fun article, I see a lot of missed potential here.
For example, the Talk Show Log ends before we get to a true argument about walls vs plates. The tension gets built up, but there's no climax. I wanted to see them fight!
Maybe it's just me, but the line at the end kind of slipped under my radar. Although it's a fantastic line to end on, the reason for bolding "fondly" is beyond me. Consider inserting an explanation or framing it in a way where it makes more sense.
It's reference to the video log where one of the Chef's examples of why food that's presented good is bad was the Fondue surrounding cakes.
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… is it weird that I think Chef Hoffman is the tragic hero of this piece?
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