Here's my SCP Pitch

Summary:

I already have an idea up and ready but I need to go through the steps for posting, which also means I need to get my idea greenlit.

Here's my SCP Pitch

Alex the Wolf 15 Oct 2020 13:51

Here's my Idea for an SCP, it can be any number depending on what's available at the time.

SCP-XXXX "The Interdimensional Phoenix" Either Keter or Thaumiel class
A Black, White, Red, and Light blue Phoenix made of Darkness and Light with God-like powers and the ability to manipulate the fabric of space-time to it's whim. People once worshiped it like a God of some sort and was discovered by the foundation trying to re-contain an escaped SCP, maybe 682 or something, and had it pinned under it's fiery claw. After helping to get the other back to whatever site it broke out of the phoenix ends up flying away. It is later captured and contained at site-[REDACTED] in a containment cell that is a mock-temple for the god-like fire-bird and D-Class are to bring it food like fresh fruits and raw meat every 4-7 hours.

Please let me know if I should edit anythig or if I'm good to post or not, thanks. I Will create my own image for the SCP so that there's no copyright issues.

Forum Criticism Team - Junior Staff Post

OCuin 15 Oct 2020 15:16

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