The Heart of the Beast / Discussion

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aismallard 15 Oct 2020 03:24

Thanks to the Wikidorks (UraniumEmpire, SoullessSingularity, The Great Hippo) for critique and help with the narrative!

Grigori Karpin 15 Oct 2020 08:48

You actually made me care about 682, it’s gotta be a trick!

But seriously, this is a terrific article.

+1

Rounderhouse 18 Oct 2020 05:35

Lenny is a good boy….

Getting me to care about old S1s is a feat, but this manages to do it really well. Tim's tone, his actions throughout the tale - I don't read a lot of WWS but his character comes through this clear as day. It's a great tale, a great take on a classic anomaly through a new context and a new pair of eyes.

overmind2000 25 Oct 2020 21:46

Great story. I'm beginning to think that Unfounded is a better place to live compared to the canon timeline, at least with things like this. If Tim can actually pacify 682 then he's saved hundreds (possibly thousands) of lives that would have been lost in the endless string of attempts to terminate the reptile.

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DarkStuff 18 Dec 2020 08:56

One of the strongest characterizations of Tim on the site, and I am rather envious of the amount of detail you have for things they do (like how he cleans a wound, and the tools for removing a felled tree from the road). Absolutely wonderful. +1

marinemashup 30 May 2021 23:25

I need more sarcastic 682 in my life.
Also one of the best portrayals of Wilson I have read so far.

Fernlom 10 Feb 2023 00:47

God this actually just makes sense. Of course Tim could pacify 682. Genuine care and kindness. It's just perfect