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Self deleted SCP-5495. Was part of the Jam con, but discussion prompted me to consider workshopping the idea and writing some more. (Posted as reply on accident, my bad)
SCP-5469 is a 1.9 meter tall Caucasian male of European descent named Callum Relaxat. Callum has an unkempt facial hair around his jaw and upper lip, with an increase of facial hair around the chin area. He also has thick, curly, light brown hair that is around 30.48 centimetres in height. SCP-5469 weighs around 80 pounds, despite his perceived age, which is estimated to be around 25 or 30 (based on observed appearance), improper self-deletion, cleared at -13 with N_Aepic_Fael and Jacob Conwell witnessing.
SCP-5083 is an African American male, 21 years of age with dark black hair, and brown eyes. the SCP weighs 100 kg and is 190 cm tall, with the anomalous ability to produce electricity from the fingertips. The voltage can range from low to high, but the anomaly tends to express favoritism towards higher voltages, and can do so more easily after consuming red meat products. Due to the SCP's abilities, their memory and intelligence are superior to a typical human. Because of this, SCP-5083 has standard Mobile Task Force training, and is proficient with bladed weapons and firearms, but where SCP-5083 really shines is hand to hand combat. All of which is due to the encounters the SCP has had with MTF agents and foundation guards. The SCP can also produce blade like objects made of electricity that stems from the back of the hand and forms a thin point. The SCP also possesses a rage state that allows for the anomaly to produce an electromagnetic field that instantly terminates someone upon contact.
Deleted at -21 and three votes.
SCP-5119 appears to be a small ammunition bag manufactured in early 1916 in ████ and is around 1.3 meters in length. SCP-5119 will (when provided with a weapon) produce an infinite stream of ammunition from an indeterminate source. SCP-5119 will either produce fully loaded magazines or single rounds depending on the nature of the weapon. SCP-5119 can also produce ammunition larger than its physical dimensions, this includes 120mm tank shells and 85mm Rocket propelled grenades. SCP-5119 will only exhibit its anomalous properties if a firearm is placed within a 2 meter radius around SCP-5119. Extensive testing has been done to uncover the origin of SCP-5119's ammunition but nothing has proved effective. All ammunition dispensed from SCP-5119 should be labeled as SCP- 5119-1 respectively. After a fatal shooting with ████████ police department and █████ the foundation was contacted when local police reported the gunman “never stopped shooting” it is estimated the shooter fired over 8400 rounds from 4 different weapons before they were terminated by MTF Pi-1 this is where SCP-5119's anomalous properties were discovered.
Deleted at -14 and three votes.
Descriptions of Scp-5958-1: A tall white humanoid in a Blue Suit coat, Black shirt, and Blue dress pants and A Green bow tie. The entity has an extraordinarily high intelligence, And loves having long conversations with staff members who enter its containment cell, The entity particularly likes chess as no one has been able to be best it
Deleted at -22 and three votes.
SCP-5240 is a male humanoid measuring approximately 2.6 meters(or 8 feet) in height. It is described to have a pale green skin tone, and faded blue/purple eyes. The entity lacks normal facial features, instead having slits in the face for verbal communication. It has two appendages capable of extending outward quickly, two beginning at the shoulder blades, capable of generating telekinetic orbs, and two others for normal utility purposes, improper self-deletion, cleared at -13 with Deadly Bread and stormbreath witnessing.
(account deleted) 10 Oct 2020 16:47
Self-deleted SCP-2693.
(account deleted), 10 Oct 2020 16:47
Scp-5134 appears to be a toy UFO. Inside are an extremely large amount of wind-up toy robots (known as instances of Scp 5134-1), each being 1 foot tall. It is unknown how so many fit inside a toy UFO large enough to fit 1 at best, but the most popular theory is that the UFO leads to a separate dimension.
Deleted at -20 and three votes.
Scp-5158 appears to be a luxury hotel. If a human being (now referred to as scp 5158-1) enters, he/she will be greeted by instances of scp 5158-2. Instances of 5851-2 appear to be human sized half-human-half-animal marionettes.
Summarily deleted at -21 and three votes.
SCP-5120 is a bottle of blue cleaning ethanol rated at 93% vol. It's appearance is identical to other bottles of it's kind.
When SCP-5120 comes into contact with a human (thereafter named SCP-5120-1), it first appears as nothing special, and the alcohol appears to evaporate. After 25 days of exposure to SCP-5120, subjects start reporting symptoms of dizziness and look slightly intoxicated at times. After 35 days, subjects report feeling euphoria at random intervals of time, and appear more intoxicated. After 50 days, subjects are now considered fully infected. They appear completely drunk, and the smell of alcohol can be recognized from 3 meters away.
Deleted at -19 and three votes.
SCP-5340 is a black hole like entity that appears as a colourful cloud, it doesn't have a gender and appears to have no race. It radiates small bolts of electricity, firing from the center. The center of the object appears to be a black sphere that has been proven to calm a victim into a state where it is easy to eliminate. The more living beings that it consumes, the larger it grows. Results from tests have proven that the object's colour changes when angered, approached or touched.
Deleted at -17 and three votes.
Scp-5238 is a leather brown bear with button eyes, a slit in its chest going from its waist up to its neck and a pink bow on its head. It is about the size of a normal grizzly bear, and is followed around by its cubs, which are smaller versions of it but without bows or slits.
Deleted at -16 and three votes.
SCP-5311 is a phenomenon sporadically affecting Taxicab services across the continental United States, in which food items and other edible substances left within the interior of a parked or unattended Taxicab will become briefly animate and conglomerate into a single humanoid shape located in the driver's seat, which results in the creation of an SCP-5311-1 instance.
Deleted at -12 and three votes.
Feedback Ported:
This could be really neat if it did absolutely anything with the premise.
Agreeing with Roget, there's a concept and nothing else here. Additionally, there are some points that could use clarity (and perhaps would give you some inspiration on where to go):
You should also think about what kind of theme you're going for with this. Right now it seems like 'weird for weird's sake'.
It starts off odd and doesn't continue. It's incomplete and reads like a draft waiting to be expanded on. Extension to this SCP would greatly help it a lot.
October 3, 2020: I just want to add on to this post. The article feels random for random sake.
"A vegetable that turns into a human when inside a taxi car."
It's not funny nor it's creepy, it's just random.
SCP-5416 is a circular mausoleum and grave monument on a raised knoll located near the center of █████████ Cemetery, outside of █████████, Louisiana. SCP-5416 was erected in 1889, and contains the remains of local philanthropist Michael Sofford and his wife Penelope Sofford. The mausoleum features decorative urns and a marble statue of a seated angel carved by Jason De Cannes. The statue carries a book inscribed with the quote: "It is more blessed to give than to receive." The statue has been vandalized with the word 'mammon' carved into the angel's left foot.
Deleted at -12 and three votes.
Feedback Ported:
This is very well written.
But, despite the interesting nature of the anomaly… there are two large problems:
1) the blacked out sections make no sense in a modern day article unless they serve the story… it seems the blacked out portions could be replaced with fictional names and it would work just as well… which to me means there shouldn’t be any black outs
2) there isn’t much substance here beyond the interesting anomaly… and no matter how well written the anomaly is, without some sort of narrative I find this article to be lacking something to grab onto.
-1
I think you could really expand this idea to encompass a real story, whether that be of the history of the one who buried the money or the statue itself or someone being stuck in the effect… there’s more to this you can and should tell
SCP-5025 is a 1.7 meter tall human skeleton which shows full sapience as well as the abilities of movement and vocalization, despite lacking any of the muscles required for these actions. Self-titled as “The King of Parties,” SCP-5025 has an obstreperous and disorderly disposition.
Deleted at -12 and three votes.
Feedback Ported:
For the most part, this does what it intends to do. I can see that you were aiming for a minimalist self-contained story, and you've achieved that. However, I feel that this came at the cost in which you've lost any real development with the anomaly you've introduced. Specifically, there's no real reason to 'make me care' about the anomaly here. As such, the ending on this one is a bit… less than satisfactory. You go through detailing therapy sessions, which later leads on into the anomaly disappearing from the cemetery because it realized that excessive partying wasn't healthy; however, the lack of… familiarity I have with this anomaly weighs this down.
That, and there are a lot of redactions here which don't really seem necessary to me, at least. Such as dates, name locations, names themselves. You can just make up an entirely random name, place, and date, and the story would still go on perfectly. The redactions here sorta take away from the readers' immersion and makes the entire piece a bit less evocative.
Considering the factors stated above, unfortunately, I'm going to have to downvote this.
SCP-5092 appears to be a human male in his late teens, who identifies as “Kuizzler”. It has an obsession for trivia, knowledge, and trivia game shows. It has a very high capacity for learning and accruing information and is confirmed to have eidetic memory. While asleep, SCP-5092 is capable of oneiric telepathic behaviors, as well as having no need for sustenance or hydration. It can purposely sleep indefinitely unless awakened by an external force.
Deleted at -12 and three votes.
Feedback Ported:
Hi author,
I'll speak simply and directly; the tone and pacing of this article is simply insufficient. There is a ton of material here that simply does not evolve the story in any meaningful way and detracts from my desire to reach the end of this piece. The final note is 100% unbelievable in terms of language, tone, and delivery but this is just part of this piece's suite of problems.
On the surface, a piece about someone who snips dreams is an interesting one to explore but the accommodations given to this SCP seem customer-made to make the Foundation look silly and give you an article. I believe you present the Foundation in a careless fashion to show off your monster and the work suffers for it overall.
-1, this needs a good deal more time in the draft board.
SCP-5257 is a large white cardboard pharmaceutical box with the words "Human Aquarium" on one side. SCP-5257 contains three plastic pill cans and a piece of paper labeled "Instructions". The cans are labeled Tank Growth, Transpara skin and Inhabitants, and each contain 56 pills, from now on the cans will be refereed to as SCP-5257-1 to SCP-5257. The back of the cardboard box has a paragraph printed on it.
Deleted at -20 and three votes.
Self deleted "Confession", SCP-5118. Concept was liked but discussion thread pointed out some flaws in the delivery. Will be revising and reposting after more crit.
