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Hmmmm….
What can I say?
I like how the whole SCP progress
That said…. Ilthe ending I feel is just another unneeded turn after another turn: for one thing, I doubt that is how cancer feels. Which also makes the end log unnecessary as well. Plus, the feeling it was rushed.
+1, despite a faltering ending.
(as the Chinese would say, "Dragon head, tiger tail")
Short and digestible, and I think it gave me a little heartache due to its ending. Lovely!
+1
Ummmm I think there's a mistake in the date of Test 40, it should be 2024, right? Love this SCP, though that ending broke my heart ;-;
This kind of concept involving biology requires some explaining I feel. Does the plant spread? Is the plant regenerative or how does it live? What is the significance in it being a sunflower?
I did not really have the opportunity to connect with the researcher as much as I could have. The ending was pretty satisfactory however I know that I would have appreciated it more if there was more on the character earlier on. The list of grown parts does not help in this regard. I could read a few examples before I lost interest. Maybe more interactions between the researcher and the SCP would help, exploring the relation between them through a testing log?
Because of these factors I have mentioned, I actually think this article could need some work.
Novote.
upvoted after reading test 10. i have severe scoliosis; it's disfiguring, deforming, constantly painful. kinda wish these little guys were real.
Wouldn't a sunflower technically be hundreds of flowers with different pistils? Otherwise, interesting concept.
Novote.
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