SCP-5067 / Discussion

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AbsentmindedNihilist 19 Jun 2020 06:08

hi i took my ADHD meds in the evening instead of the morning and that was a grave mistake. this will be edited later when it is not 2am and i can properly use wikidot syntax. thank you to idea critters minathewitch, DrFullham, and soulless and draft critters drfullham (again) sonderance, and malyce. i can die peacefully now. night night, rat bastards.

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Djlolotis 19 Jun 2020 06:11

🗿😢Hurt feeling, I am a mouse bastard

Nagiros 19 Jun 2020 14:16

While it's obvious you did your best with some lackluster containment procedures, I still have some issues with the description and addenda; at a certain point Fiver's character becomes less tragic and more grating, and the ending addendum is a bit too… cinematic, I guess? While the reveal makes a good resolution for Fiver's character, the way it's presented is odd. Not sure if it's just the brevity of the addendum as a whole or the nonclinical line about the children, though.

aw, fuck.

Tyumen 19 Jun 2020 15:36

I've got to admit that this brought me close to tears.

+1

Ethagon 23 Jun 2020 15:44

I really like how emotional but still robotic Fiver's dialogue feels. +1

Dr_Valamenco 24 May 2021 02:08

Short, and nicely put together. +1

TriPizza 08 Jan 2023 04:17

Fiver is so cute awwwh , my heart

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3P

Navo cailmj 11 Jan 2023 08:42

Fiver is so cute like bt-7274