A day at the (un)stables / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page A day at the (un)stables.

Bryx 21 Aug 2015 20:47

Author, tales generally don't get attribute tags like the SCPs do. We have a standardized tagging system, so it's usually a good idea to leave it to the tagging team.

TheLoyalSubject 21 Aug 2015 20:55

"D'you see the testing goin' on in paddock thirteen?"

the testing goin' on in paddock thirteen?

goin' on in paddock thirteen

paddock thirteen?

I see what you did. I promise not to tell anyone. But the P is silent.

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Cavalry 22 Aug 2015 03:23

Thanks Bryx, this is my first tale, (hoping that doesn't incite downvotes) and I'm relatively new. Again, thanks.

TheLoyalSubject: Um. Yeah. I have no Idea what you are talking about. I feel like you're goin' on about some loomernaty stuff.

TheLoyalSubject 27 Aug 2015 20:47

Loomernaty.

psul 22 Aug 2015 19:29

"to optimistic" should be "too".

Otherwise, I enjoyed this for the same reasons I mentioned in the forum. It's not the most artistic writing, but that fits the subject and tone. The changes you made around the pegasus were enough to swing my upvote.