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│JAMCON 2020│ Conceptualized and posted in about 4 hours!
I've always wanted to write a mystery, so I did a shortform one! Completely inspired by Detective Conan/Case Closed, one of my favorite anime ever.
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BIG +1. This is great, even just the main skip on its own is quite cool, and the murder makes it that much more compelling. I'll have a look at your author page and read some more.
Is there a reason why the Japanese name order differs between the two characters?
Only cause Kazato and Kogoro are similar enough that I felt like people could get mixed up, so I instead used Akechi.
Did you create the image of this SCP?
Why would Only 13 people in the whole world have access to the full info on this SCP? No info in this should be that classified, it should be a level 3 at the most. It’s really not that important of a SCP.
And if you seriously want to pretend it’s important enough that only 05 get to hear about it atleast toss in an addendum that says the interviewer was amnesticized afterwards, they’re not 05 so they shouldn’t be allowed to remember if it truly can only be known by 05
Also why didn’t the interviewer ask her how she former a reality altering anomaly, this is the SCP foundation we don’t really care who dun it we care how they dun it. It seems like you had just the twist in your head and you rushed every other aspect of the article.
You had me until the end, the dialogue was melodramatic and didn’t fit in tonally with what had come before. Which is a shame because up until that point I really liked it. I think toning that down and maybe having a log before building up to it a little more would fix my issues with this one.
Whether you like it or not, history is on our side. We will bury you!
Emm…… It's a good skip.
Advantage:
1. the murder is exciting enough to attract me to read
2. your japanese is well.
Disadvantage:
1. I don't understand the motive of Kazato. Is that status, money, or other reasons?
2.Kazato, the murderer of Carter, is obvious. I suggest that you add a few more suspects.
As a translator, the skip is easy to translate. The idea of the skip is new. I hope you can write more good mystery in the future!
I have upvoted for the skip.
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