For the record, incident 519a is NOT meant to be the same incident as described in SCP-400 (unless you'd rather it be, of course :p).
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I like this one. +1 (I've applied and I'll vote favorably soon…)
'No way! My girlfriend wouldn't say that!'
'DUDE! I'm just repeating what she's saying?'
'Oh yeah?'
'One sec:Honey? Are you schizophrenic again?: Oh man dude, you are one messed up caller…"
"SHUT UP!"
"Hey! You shouldn't talk that way to your girlfriend dude."
"I'm not I'm talking to you!!"
"Honey! I'm going to call the psychologist… maybe we need to up the pills!"
"No! I'm perfectly fine!"
"Not my Diagnosis."
Subject (Redacted) had to be escorted from the room and placed in a psyho-ward until return of sanity. SCP was unharmed.
I could really see that happening. weird.
That's actually pretty close to what I envisioned, except that the girlfriend would not be able to hear anything that the subject says to the SCP. Maybe I need to clarify that a bit.
Probably necroing or something, but it's gotta be asked:
What happens if you ask 519 if you can talk to 519?
I just find this really confusing.
The voice is a third party that can talk and interject with the subject?
Or is it an interceptor and just tells the subject what the other person is saying?
I like this far more than the recently archived 400.
Argh. It's an interesting concept, in a "this is clearly more than it says it is" way, but the text is poorly organized and unspecific — it really doesn't do the concept justice at all.
if your reading this your gay
This one has a lot of potential, and you could work it over from a lot of different angles. I see you've chosen to go the more humorous route.
However, the language is a bit unclear. I lose the flow of the narrative about halfway through while you're attempting to describe the behavior of the telephone voice during a call, and I'm finding it hard to pick it back up again.
Other than that, great SCP. Keep up the good work.
Good lord there were a lot of Series 1 telephone skips.
This one seems muddled. I don't have a literal sense of what the caller experiences once SCP-519 connects their call, and I don't think the confusion is intentional mystery.
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