SCP-5222 / Discussion

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pxdnbluesoul 10 Mar 2020 00:31

Big thanks to Djoric who pitched the idea for Lord Explosion's Explosion School in #site19 seven years ago, didn't do anything with it, and let me run with the idea.

Image is my own, released into public domain.

Boldposted, Bright's Challenge, for Jamcon. Shout to Firefox for the spell checking and, that's about it really.

Discussed in-depth on SCP Cafe here.

Last edited on 10 Mar 2020 16:26 by pxdnbluesoul Show more

T Rutherford 10 Mar 2020 21:42

Loving the contrast between the extreme technobabble / RAISA Footnotes and the delightfully wacky, kick-ass reality within this pocket dimension. It came on a bit heavy at first, but once I sunk my teeth into the logs, I was all in.

My only real crit is I can't get behind using blank log-lines to denote a period of silence. Elipses, (silence), or even pause, sure, but just an empty line? It does the job, but it still stands out a shade. There's also a few SPaG errors and redundancies "…both teams were lost. All 264 members are considered lost and have.." but this is a jam, so who's counting?

+1

P.S. I wrot a ting? I wrot a ting.

Last edited on 10 Mar 2020 21:44 by T Rutherford Show more

RockTeethMothEyes 10 Mar 2020 21:52

Holy shit I don't think I've ever laughed so much reading MTF logs. This is hilarious.

Lt Flops 15 Mar 2020 09:01

I hope we see way more of this GOI in future articles!

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(account deleted) 03 May 2020 06:51

I heard about this before it came out on Café and I still managed to laugh my ass off. +1 because nobody has added a +2 yet. Also I can’t wait for a tale on this.

NickNirus 09 Oct 2020 20:18

Loved it when I first read it in May, love it now. The intense technical jargon perfectly sets up the MTF logs. Explosively upvoted

pxdnbluesoul 10 Oct 2020 18:07

I appreciate that.