Filled To The Brim With Girlish Glee / Discussion

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UraniumEmpire 07 Mar 2020 19:32

go ahead
throw me the rope you know i'm too afraid to take
hand me the vase you know i'll drop
and watch it shatter, watch me fumble for the pieces...

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Originally by DrChandra and DianaBerry, critiqued by DianaBerry and Mew-ltiverse, here's the rewrite finally.

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… and I'm not Robert Frost.

DianaBerry 07 Mar 2020 19:34

THIS IS SO GOOD OH MY GOD. You are an excellent writer and this fantastic with this! You wrote better for my GoI then I did lol! I seriously cannot express enough how much I love this! +1!

Mew-ltiverse 07 Mar 2020 19:35

This is absolutely amazing. The way the that the characters are built across the different tabs is absolutely brilliant, and the story took twists I just did not expect and did so in very clever ways. Easy +1.

Site Criticism Team - Review

TheMightyMcB 07 Mar 2020 20:13

Alright so, I've always found the idea of a TERF GoI to be… distasteful, but dammit UE, you really do have a way to make a great fucking villain. I hate JGT here, so much, and 100% of that was due to your characterization. The randoms in chat are braindead sheep, KeeLee is disgusting and imposing, and PINK FLY's dramatic blackmail flip was both unexpected and terrifying.

Angel: Ella does the meme you used on your sister work on lesbos?

This is thoroughly excellent dialogue and it made me angry to read. The whole exchange was infuriating and realistic. When Sara broke and sent the meme in chat, the payoff was instantaneous and gratifying.

This is excellent and I never wanna read it again. +1

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Uncle Nicolini 07 Mar 2020 20:17

yeah, this was vile and i hated it. sara yarkoni needs a goddamn spa day or something, this poor woman has been through enough.

all this being said, it was an excellent read and truly only ue could bring a fitting characterization to jgt. well done, + 1.

Snapdragon133 07 Mar 2020 20:29

I simultaneously can't wait and never want to see JGT's again. They are very gross, +1.

PeppersGhost 07 Mar 2020 22:19

This is seriously impressive. The whole idea of JGT as a GOI makes me anxious since the whole thing can easily go so, so wrong; it's at the intersection of a lot of volatile issues that can be (and have been) very easily be mishandled, but you managed to make the requisite balancing act look effortless.

CaptainBacon 08 Mar 2020 23:30

This makes me sick to my stomach but that's what it was supposed to do so I guess that means it's good?

Raptie 09 Mar 2020 01:32

+1 for the very really adrenaline dump I'm experiencing right now

You wrote a character so believably horrible and abusive that it triggered my PTSD. That's… That's impressive as fuck

now if you'll excuse me I'm going to go do some grounding exercises to calm down

Genshed 09 Mar 2020 03:43

This was the kind of true-to-life evil that really angers, upsets and nauseates people. To blend it with anomalous elements is masterful.

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