Hmm. Firstly, I'm confused about why your description starts on a different line to the header. I understand it's an intentional choice for some, but it looks off when all the other sections (including the discovery section) begin on the same line as their headers.
Besides that, this is a really generic antimeme. The clues are hardly subtle at all, and there's no especially interesting big reveal which makes up for the fact that it's just an antimemetic person, something that's been done so much before, with the additional of anomalous methods of suicide. In addition, there's no particular reason I should care about this specific character due to the lack of any real characterisation beyond just being suicidal. More successful articles generally present some unique aspect to the person, which this just doesn't do.
I do understand what's going on in the final section, but it's really nothing that distinguishes itself from better sad antimemes/similar like SCP-4773 or SCP-4517.
