Strangely enough, as short as this is I feel like there's too many extraneous details associated with the object here. It's a corpse that's magically affixed to two different things, and it leaks alcohol from its mouth, and if the alcohol overflows its containing it somehow (and I cannot figure out how this is supposed to work in practice) spells stuff out. As a core concept that feels way too convoluted and random to me.
I'm assuming that we're supposed to get the impression that this guy's job writing bad jokes somehow drove him to, if not suicide or suicidal alcoholism, to some sort of existential despair. If that's so, I'm not buying it. With all of the horrible, fucked-up stuff that people deal with every day, this guy is going to be distraught because he writes goofy joke books? You have to do a lot more work establishing this character before that even comes close to something that I could imagine happening, and I'm not sure that's possible. Certainly not in the delivery system employed here.
I suspect the setup is lacking because the point of the article is indeed the opportunity to write out bad jokes. I think we've reached a point in the wiki's development where there needs to be a certain amount of weight to something that's fit to be on the mainlist. Not necessarily a "this is serious and life-changing" kind of weight, but something that's going to affect a reader more than three goofy puns. I don't think this is something that hangs with the standard established elsewhere on the wiki.
Finally:
This was made in literally an hour and a half.
I can't think of a single time where I've seen this kind of statement and went "yep, this is totally finished and of acceptable quality." This very much reads like something that was written in an hour. I get that there's a deadline. Sometimes you don't make those deadlines if what you're aiming for is putting out the best possible piece you can.
