SCP-5900 / Discussion

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aismallard 21 Jan 2020 04:01

PITCHBLACK

The Foundation's intelligence and communications network is, bar none, the most advanced monitoring network ever. It's backed with redundant systems, air-gapped servers, and enough support personnel to fill multiple dedicated Sites. So what happens when it goes dark?

Thanks to:

• wctaiwan
• fluffywaffles
• Rounderhouse
• Yossipossi
• Modulum
• Captain Kirby
• Lambda Fairy
• pxdnbluesoul for "ROMP" as well as his tale SCUTTLE

Additional appreciation to Rounderhouse for help during the drafting process, and allowing me to write for his canon and use his styling.

+ Image information

• outage.png - Original creation, created in LibreOffice Calc
• relay.jpeg - https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Lampposts,_Queen%27s_Bridge,_Belfast_-_geograph.org.uk_-_1070007.jpg
• site-07.jpeg - https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:North_Sea_oil_rig_(43076105605).jpg
• ;-).png - Screenshot of http://scp-int.wikidot.com/macro-7happy7-proposal

EDIT (2021/02/27): After a long time of feeling personally underwhelmed with the ending, I have replaced it with a different one I feel is more satisfying.

Last edited on 28 Feb 2021 01:14 by aismallard Show more

A Random Day 21 Jan 2020 04:08

The technobabble and the dialogue aren’t bad, but I can’t help but feel that SCUTTLE is far more effective at mixing the frustration of broken technology with the sheer terror of broken Foundation technology.

Last edited on 21 Jan 2020 16:09 by A Random Day Show more

Rounderhouse 21 Jan 2020 04:23

man it's been dope seeing this take shape

you did the idea far more justice than i could have, well done

Dr Balthazaar 21 Jan 2020 04:59

Enjoyed this. Oil platform Foundation sites are rad

Uncle Nicolini 21 Jan 2020 13:49

this reads as if it were written by someone who has experienced a similar event before, which I don't doubt knowing aismallard's background. the characterization and technobabble really sold this for this me, as i never felt completely lost in it as i do in most other instances. i also really like the concept of a blackout in site communications. very well done overall.

Grigori Karpin 21 Jan 2020 21:27

Good hook at the end, otherwise agreed with the above sentiments that the techno jargon is very effective

+1

r0se 23 Jan 2020 00:07

upvoted for thaumaturgic javascript

Jacob Conwell 23 Jan 2020 05:50

As others have said, this article does a solid job of keeping the technobabble from being incomprehensible nonsense. I was able to get a good grasp of what the techies here were up to, and the implied technologies being used were fascinating, especially the potential for literal computer wizards at ICSUT. Additionally, the note at the end was particularly satisfying, as it lets us know who pulled the trigger on the outage, but raises several more questions for the reader to ponder.

All in all, a good SCP article. +1.

sachiel187 23 Jan 2020 22:38

upvoted for being yet another well done "SCP's IT department sees shit get broken" type article. as someone in IT, these always resonate with me.

where have i seen L.S. before?

aismallard 24 Jan 2020 00:22

+ Spoilers

GoI-019

NickNirus 25 Jan 2020 14:04

How did we take this long to get to thaumaturgic javascript?

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