My review!
This tale is about a monster attacking a grandma and granddaughter. The prose here stands out. It is noticeably good, in its own right, the kind of prose that makes you go "man this author could write about anything and I'd read it". Well, maybe not quite that good — we're an amateur writing site after all. But it's the type of writing that tells you the person writing it could get there with effort. Despite being a "monster story", it's actually pretty touching. The dynamics of the family are well ordained, the characters simple but real, the love legitimate feeling. I like it a lot.
My review has not changed. +1~!