It's finally up!
I have been sitting on this one for a long time, haven't I? After a day of writing, a few weeks worth of gathering feedback and nearly a year of doing nothing with it, it's up! Thank you to my friends in real life who've provided feedback (and my teacher), and the random people in IRC who've provided their thoughts and helped make this thing a reality! I hope you've enjoyed my dark little tale of fratricide and cannibalism, as I once again sink into the abyss till the next time I come back!