Payday / Discussion

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Kulzn 27 Jan 2009 00:56

I chortled.

DrTVague 30 Jan 2009 19:51

Not sure what happened here

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Agent Circeus 13 Mar 2009 14:08

The robber became Dr. Bright.

DrClef 07 Feb 2009 00:59

More win. :3

Sir Viking 15 Mar 2009 07:59

XD Greatest 'robbery' ever.

Pig_catapult 16 Mar 2009 04:40

Good show! *applause* XD

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Piffy is an SCP Foundation Moderator, Lv. 9001 Squishy Wizard, and Knight of the Red Pen.

Moral.

Lacynth 16 Mar 2009 08:34

Moral of the story. Do not harangue employees of the Foundation on payday. And if your victim is not afraid of you, time to pick a different target for intimidation.

Dr Gears 16 Mar 2009 13:23

We need to add to this…anyone else want to take a crack at it?

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129-210 16 Mar 2009 14:08

I'll give it a shot. My writing on this site thus far hasn't gotten very positive reviews, though. Feel free to revert, edit, etc.

Really quickly, though… How outlandish is this allowed to get, exactly?

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Pig_catapult (guest) 16 Mar 2009 20:22

I'm at a school computer right now, so I can't edit it now without the filter removing all instances of "the 'F'-word" (which would be bad), but, when I get home, I'm planning on editing this thing for stuff like tense consistency, and maybe joining in the fun. Of course, if anyone wants to tackle the proofreading before I get to it, go ahead, but, er, yeah….

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Pig_catapult 16 Mar 2009 21:43

Alright. Here I go!

~EDIT~

Okay, I fixed it up a bit, but I decided that the current ending is actually pretty good as it is.

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Kain Pathos Crow (guest) 16 Mar 2009 19:49

…?

When did I come into this?

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Pig_catapult (guest) 16 Mar 2009 20:17

This morning, I believe.

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Pig_catapult (guest) 16 Mar 2009 20:24

To be more specific, approximately five hours ago, and Mr. 129-210 did it.

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Kain Pathos Crow (guest) 17 Mar 2009 11:41

Huh….

I'm not sure I'd be there. I tend not to go to places with normal people. Tends to cause somewhat of a security breach…

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129-210 17 Mar 2009 14:51

Sorry. I was going for escalating bewilderment of the robbers and tried invoking the rule of funny.

I'll delete that last section, then.

tunedtoadeadchannel 02 Apr 2009 00:40

So, do the good doctors then go on to rob the bank?

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Dr Voss 02 Apr 2009 01:22

It's a good thing I can tell you're not serious. Others might not realise this, and without me to tell them, they might react badly.

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tunedtoadeadchannel 02 Apr 2009 07:14

Ah, thank you.

thedeadlymoose 25 Sep 2011 09:06

Don't like how this cuts off, and I feel it's contrived that the robber just puts on Bright's shiny necklace.

Besides that, though, I like it. +1

tunedtoadeadchannel 25 Sep 2011 20:16

You only have to touch it.

thedeadlymoose 25 Sep 2011 21:36

…

I don't know why that didn't f'in occur to me.

…Actually the worst part is that I think I had the thought "he only had to touch it, why did he go through putting it on, is this an earlier version of 963 or something"

worst logic failure ever :|

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