SCP-4841 / Discussion

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Tufto 16 Jun 2019 23:18

They are knocking now upon your door
They measure the room, they know the score
They're mopping up the butcher's floor
Of your broken little hearts
O children

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Thanks to aismallard for crit and Uncle Nicolini for the suggestion of mentioning stigmata.

For an added spoilerific bonus

+1

DrSevere 20 Jun 2019 14:32

Very good, sufficiently weird, I don't fully get it but that's okay.

Couple minor nitpicks:

Foundation archeological digs are planned in the vicinity of SCP-4841 for mid-2020.

Might wanna move that date back or just make it "near future" or something, unless you're planning to update this next year.

Any depiction of a human figure brought into SCP-4841 will, after an indeterminate period of time beneath one hour, begin to anomalously generate blood around the eyes and wrists in the painting

It says "Depiction" but then only talks about paintings afterwards. What about statues, photographs, etc?

(account deleted) 24 Sep 2019 16:13

Carvings on the exterior showing St. John with multiple arms

Freaking finally.

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A bit confused

ArcadianRook 13 Dec 2020 22:11

Hey, I'm a bit confused about what brought on the "freaking finally."
I'm a bit new around here (only discovered SCP about 2 months ago) what am I missing?
Thanks!

Imperios 29 Oct 2019 16:56

Minor nitpick: if you want to describe where the village is located, you should mention the federal subject, not the district. Districts in Russia are second-level administrative divisions, similar to American counties, and often have identical names in different regions.

Just say the village is in Krasnoyarsk Krai, it will convey more information for anyone familiar with Russia.

MalyceGraves 21 Nov 2019 17:46

Of all the "newer" Sarkic scips, this one is probably my favorite. The journal entries are positively haunting. Excellently done, friend. +1

Gabriel McQueen 02 Dec 2019 05:56

Might I suggest the broader term "image" in place of "painting" in the second paragraph of the description?

halfgood 12 Jul 2020 14:48

Spoiler: I take it then it's not pronounced "John", but like "Ion"?

ArcadianRook 13 Dec 2020 22:13

*looking between your post and the scip. Face palms* NOW I FRICKIN' GET IT!!!
… thank you.

Maxyfran73 29 Jun 2022 19:44

I love this one a lot. Putting skip concepts into historical settings is one of my favorite things on the site, and this article does that really, really well. The letters are a bit on the 'meh' side, but the overall piece still is really, really good.

+1~