Critter Profile: Bartholomew! / Discussion

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It's Bartholomew's Big Break!

Lt Flops 05 Jun 2019 23:32

Critter Profile: Bartholomew!
Authors: KindlyTurtleClem and Lt Flops

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Here's a new co-authored Critter Profile by Clem and I. This is the first Wilson's Wildlife Solutions content either of us has written. While it was brand new territory for us, it was also something we enjoyed writing immensely.

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▶ Special Thanks and Image Attribution

Special Thanks — Critters & Beta Readers

▶ DarkStuff
▶ Ellie3
▶ Ayers
▶ Dain from Discord, who read this out loud in voice chat, exposing some awkward wording.

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Image Attribution

▶ 1st Image – CC BY 2.0
▶ 2nd Image – CC BY-SA 2.0

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Last edited on 12 Dec 2019 03:06 by Lt Flops Show more

Re: It's Bartholomew's Big Break!

(account deleted) 07 Jun 2019 05:38

They are wild waves of the sea, foaming up their shame; wandering stars, for whom blackest darkness has been reserved forever.

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Uncle Nicolini 06 Jun 2019 01:24

Though this deviates from the standard Wilson tone, it is very justified because of the circumstances. Oneiroi has now joined the ranks of MCD, Wondertainment, Herman Fuller, Chicago Spirit, Nobody, the Chaos Insurgency, UIU, and Children of the Night as yet another one of the GoIs Wilson's have interacted with directly.

Lt Flops 06 Jun 2019 02:32

You forgot to mention the Shark Punching Center 😉

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DarkStuff 06 Jun 2019 15:10

And the Serpent's Hand!

Weryllium 06 Jun 2019 15:21

Tune in next week to see Wilson's take care of… the dadodo!

Lt Flops 06 Jun 2019 19:54

^{(Hey, don't give them any funny ideas)}

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Genshed 06 Jun 2019 03:10

Oh, those good-hearted people at WWS, they are becoming my favorite Foundationverse folks. +1

Liberonscien 06 Jun 2019 07:24

This felt a bit overly positive. One of the parts that I am thinking about is how they just gloss over one of their people losing an arm. That really took me out of the piece and violated my suspension of disbelief.

Lt Flops 06 Jun 2019 19:52

I've removed the warning text. I can definitely see how that would break one's suspension of disbelief. It deviates from the rest of the article's tone, too, so there is no sense keeping it in.

Though, I can't comment on the positivity angle. Wilson's formats are generally more positive than other formats out there. I actually thought we had written one of the sadder ones, so I'll consider this a difference in tastes.

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Liberonscien 07 Jun 2019 03:19

I was mostly thinking about the arm thing. Now that that portion has been removed I have reversed my vote.

Is that a trans flag logo? Or am I just putting my own assumptions regarding those colors onto it?

Lt Flops 07 Jun 2019 03:29

Yup! I learned that this theme comes with a trans pride version and decided to add it to the article (with my co-author's consent, of course). It's mostly for Pride Month, but in-universe I thought it'd be neat to use because of Faeowynn Wilson (a trans woman character).

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Grefties 06 Jun 2019 18:08

I Seriously love this

+1

+50!

Lt Flops 12 Jun 2019 00:18

Bart's Critter Profile has reached a total rating of +50 within a single week without receiving any lasting downvotes! I'm surprised this article managed to become so successful so quickly. Thanks to everyone that read and enjoyed this, I think it's a record for both Clem and I!

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MetalRavioli 10 Dec 2020 13:03

Love the WWS, and this article only boosts my love for it!
+1

Kothardarastrix 28 Apr 2021 20:13

Here, take my tears upvote.