Back Alley Deals / Discussion

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DrEverettMann 04 May 2015 08:31

Thanks to Clef and Moose for going over this with me and helping me get it working. Special thanks to Clef for extensively rewriting the final section.

Swaghetti 04 May 2015 08:44

Yes. So many Yes. +1 because intrigue.

Communism will win 04 May 2015 09:34

A typo:

I could left a bit sooner, saved you a bit of a soaking.

And a point of confusion that may also be a typo:

"Wait here, and don't let me catch you listening on. This is a highly sensitive meeting, and you're paid to listen."

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if your reading this your gay

DrEverettMann 04 May 2015 09:48

Fixed.

(account deleted) 04 May 2015 10:46

I think that some of the most interesting stuff happening in this canon is the non-Foundation stuff. This is excellently written and I dig the hell out of the Shadow Market. +1

Project-Nero 04 May 2015 12:46

I have no idea what I just read.

And I love it. +1

(account deleted) 04 May 2015 13:59

This might help a little bit in explaining about the Shadow Market. This might help a little bit with Mssrs. Marshall and Carter (under "The Merchants")

Mistbourne 04 May 2015 13:39

Bowe. Oh dear god.

+1.

NovaeDeArx 04 May 2015 19:01

I was gonna say… I don't remember what happened to the old lunatic, but I'm glad to see him dropping in for a visit.

KretchSteamclaw 04 May 2015 14:17

Was… was that a Goblin Market they were at?

Petrograd 04 May 2015 20:07

Now this I love. It was a reveal I totally didn't see coming, and an excellent flavorful context for it. +1

Questionable 04 May 2015 20:23

Um.. excuse my neubieship, but… Who the hell is bowe?

Bland 04 May 2015 20:35

General Bowe.

You know that Pandora's Box they're reopening? Bowe built it.

Questionable 04 May 2015 20:48

Oh right, thanks

TL333s 04 May 2015 23:00

Kinda feel like I'm missing a few things (though Bland explained Bowe at least!), but I like the deception in the first scene and the portrayal of MC&D proper.

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