Hey, I'd like some help on this one's tone.
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The only part vaguely like a DND character generator sort of destroyed itself…
Also, the basic idea was a factory that produces humans. I suppose that is "like a DND character generator", but for that matter 076 is "like 10101", too.
Yeah, I know that DND abbreviates things like that.
Fine, I'll unabreviate it.
No no no, it's not the abbreviations themselves I find disconcerting, it's the idea that it's a real-life, albeit broken, character generator. It just doesn't resonate with me.
…but don't listen to me, wait until the higher-ups have a butchers'.
Remember- this is nonfiction, so it's not a character generator so much as a person generator.
Also, the implication was that [DATA EXPUNGED] was made with the machine, implying that possibly, setting the values much higher than a normal human makes it less of a person or character and more of a monster.
Hmmm… it's a novel sort of idea, but the wording, bugs me to no end. You might want to work on that. And maybe start using some syntax too. It's just a little sloppy looking at the moment.
worked on it a bit. Not perfect, but better.
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I love your changes, DrBright. I note that I think it'd be better if the first reaction to an article that needs some rewriting would be to make the changes yourself. I'm good at making up concepts and making the first draft, but not so good with editing.
Generally, if someone asks for help with the scp,i have no problem editing. it's when they don't open it up that we just pick it apart.
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