SCP-4152 / Discussion

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SCP-4152

devonmartin 09 May 2019 18:18

This is my second scip, and no matter how many more I write, this one will always be the hardest.

Special thanks to the artist for granting permission to use their painting for this article (taken from Instagram @paint.goon).

Thanks to Crashington for the critique.

Happy Mother's Day!

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If this article brings back memories of your own, just know you're not alone.

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This SCP is based on "BASEMENT LOVE," a work by the immensely talented Gio Martin. Taken from https://www.instagram.com/p/BwdTrnJF95_/

Last edited on 13 May 2019 14:12 by devonmartin Show more

Crashington 09 May 2019 18:41

Glad to see this up!

T Rutherford 09 May 2019 19:39

Powerful, personal, and well written. What more can you ask for?

+1

Gideonbrass323 09 May 2019 21:01

I enjoy this article for what it is. Provides a meaningful tone and interesting topic it's gonna be a +1 from me.

Carrington 09 May 2019 21:29

I really loved this. My only marginal nitpick is that it took me a few tries to read through the segment about what happens to viewers who did experience childhood trauma. Maybe opening that paragraph with the concluding sentence would be clearer?

Kenoma 10 May 2019 03:41

Damn that image blur was an mvp

+1

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𝕎𝕙𝕖𝕟 𝕨𝕒𝕝𝕜𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕒𝕝𝕠𝕟𝕖 𝕚𝕟 𝕒 𝕛𝕦𝕟𝕘𝕝𝕖 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕣𝕦𝕖 𝕕𝕒𝕣𝕜𝕟𝕖𝕤𝕤, 𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕣𝕖 𝕒𝕣𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕣𝕖𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘𝕤 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕔𝕒𝕟 𝕤𝕙𝕠𝕨 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕨𝕒𝕪: 𝕚𝕟𝕤𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕔𝕥 𝕥𝕠 𝕤𝕦𝕣𝕧𝕚𝕧𝕖, 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕜𝕟𝕠𝕨𝕝𝕖𝕕𝕘𝕖 𝕠𝕗 𝕟𝕒𝕧𝕚𝕘𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕠𝕟, 𝕔𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕧𝕖 𝕚𝕞𝕒𝕘𝕚𝕟𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕠𝕟. 𝕎𝕚𝕥𝕙𝕠𝕦𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕞, 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕒𝕣𝕖 𝕝𝕠𝕤𝕥.

Lamentte 10 May 2019 13:18

I like this a lot, I just have one minor nitpick:

SCP-4152 is a canvas painting measuring 36"x24"

Inches are imperial measurements, SCPs are really supposed to use the Metric system.

But besides that, I did really enjoy this.

devonmartin 10 May 2019 19:58

Oh man, I forgot to fix that. My bad, fixed now.

Lastlockost 12 Sep 2019 04:54

This feels unclear in some area's.

Are the D-class just reliving the an-artists memories with their own childhood setting as the theme and characters?

Or is the painting simply warping their memory to make it seem as though they experienced the artists trauma?

That aside, it's an alright article, but the exposure sessions seem just one too many for the article.

No-vote for now.

Torrence 19 Jan 2020 03:44

Not usually a fan of AWCY, but this was well done and a good use of an-art as well.

Rokonuxa 19 Jan 2020 13:08

Its not a phase MOM, its a memetic infection MOM.

+1 for the article and my parents, for never being this bad.

I am a bit confused though. It is implied that the painting may retroactively cause trauma, but there is no test done to confirm or deny this?
I may just be misreading parts of it to be honest.

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