So I finally got around to actually writing again, felt pretty good. Big thank you to Tuomey, Roget, Dexanote, DrBleep, Magnolia, Madness, Pratten and Odocoileus for helping me refine and improve the article.
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This has a good old-school kind of vibe. There are some minor grammar errors - you're missing a few apostrophes and a space or two - but the article is solid and creep. +1
Thanks, I'm fairly confident I got them sorted now. I'm glad you liked it!
I dig the true crime vibe of this one a lot. There are some s.p.a g. errors as noted above but I'm more than willing to overlook that for how much I enjoyed this overall.+1
Whether you like it or not, history is on our side. We will bury you!
Thanks man! Like I said when you were helping me flesh out some ideas, the true crime aspect is totally accidental, but I sure am glad it worked!
Thanks mate! I always kinda preferred the simpler creepier scips, though that's probably because I haven't been able to write a decent complicated one yet, haha!
Good work, I enjoyed this SCP.
+1
…and make me sense that this thing is from Australia.
Thank you! Yeah, it's more of a write what you know sorta deal though. I basically just set them to be coming up along my coastline where I live because there's a lot of kelp that washes up here. And one time time my friends and I saw a weird green glowing thing in the water at night and noped right the hell out of there.
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Mm Mm Good
I took these photos. The top image I took on the 27th of January this year, the second image I took on the 17th of May 2015.
Found this to be a good solid read. Didn't creep me out or spook me really, but I found it enjoyable. +1 from me. Solid work my man. (Also damn am I jealous that I can't write this good.)
Thank you very much! This one I wasn't really worrying about trying to be scary, but to focus on the angle of investigation. And don't worry man, I'm sure your writing is good and only going to get better!
I've never thought I would be made to act cautious around seaweed.
+1
Dude I've ALWAYS been cautious around seaweed. This was me putting the nervousness I have around it into words
Congratulations on making seaweed scary. Enjoyed reading it nonetheless so +1 from me.
Thank you! Some wrapped around my leg when I was at the beach the other day and I freaked out for a moment, haha!
Solid concept delivered rather well. I'm not sure the final log needed as much detail as it had, but that didn't detract from my overall enjoyment. This was a really well-thought-out exploration of the anomaly, nice job!
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