David Harbour? David Harbour
Hello and welcome to my Scip. I had a lot of fun writing this and I hope you enjoy the read.
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Still like it.
Couple of formatting issues have cropped up:
- The advert has a break in the quote box in the middle.
- The second interview has some dropped italics.
Also, and I apologise, but you may have made what Saul wants a little too explicit. Still a matter of taste.
And good call on the picture.
Congratulations, good stuff.
I heard about this on the SCP Café Podcast and had to come check it out. Great job! Though in my headi imagined him looking and sounding like Irving from Mr. Robot https://i.imgur.com/Sxs0KDj.jpg
this is nice and fucked up but the title made me only think of Are You A Bad Enough Dude
pepsi > coke, on God
At first, I thought I was going to downvote this, due to the similarities with the recent SCP-4844. However, I found the execution substantially different enough to like it. It gives Saul more concrere abilities that make more sense given his occupation, and the pacing in this matches the progression of the story.
However, the last couple of interviews seem a bit… cliche? I don’t know how to put this, it just feels like I’ve read them before. In addition, there are some grammar issues here, such as:
The next day, POI-4898-1 was observed leaving his apartment at 09:10. Then again at 09:24. And a third time at 09:41.
This part could be tightened up.
In the end, this skip definitely distinguished itself from other skips of the same genre. +1
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