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djkaktus 09 Sep 2014 05:57

Part 2 of "what will probably be a football series at some point" feat. Alexylva!

My thanks to bluesoul, Conwell, and TwistedGears, who all gave this a look-see in chat. I absolutely appreciate it, guys.

As always, your comments, critiques, and criticisms are welcome :D

A Random Day 09 Sep 2014 10:15

I dunno if Cron is a CoTBG member or he's just on Alexylva's version of steroids, but I like it.

VAElynx 09 Sep 2014 10:47

The tips of Cron's fingers tingled ever so slightly, but not with any hint of the arcane. No matter how polished his inner workings, no matter how flawless the complexion of the skin wrapped around his metallic frame, no feat of engineering could put fire in those fingertips.

This here is where I upvoted.

Seriously, i love the imagery. To be human is to do magic.

OmegaTheOmniscient 09 Sep 2014 14:29

Ooh. I didn't feel the full impact of that line before, but now I love it.

TL333s 09 Sep 2014 22:34

I upvoted just for the fight song.

Then I found out what you did with Cron, somehow making this series even more amazing and tried to upvote again.

Why can't I upvote again kaktus why D:

ShenHibiki 13 Sep 2014 08:27

Honestly, didn't like the first one. Too much crammed on the same story.

But this one? Delicious. I really liked the way this was tackled and worked.

+1 with a big smile!

Switchie 06 Nov 2017 06:07

I really liked the way this was tackled and worked.

I see what you did there. But this one was done well!