Personal Log of █████ "Iceberg" ████ / Discussion

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HammerMaiden 17 Jun 2013 21:00

Prose on this is pretty clunky and uninteresting. It could have been an okay story about an 882 breach if the author had chosen a different way to present it.

-1 I'm afraid.

Drewbear 05 Jul 2013 14:55

I, too, find the hotlinks peppered throughout the story to be distracting. The story isn't bad, and I actually appreciate more unusual formats such as journal entries or email exchanges or what have you.

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Giving bearhugs to the unsuspecting since 1872.

Montala 05 Nov 2013 03:06

I found this to be interesting. But I also just came from reading Dr. Gears Log of the same incident so it was interesting to read it from Gears' emotionless, pretty much consistently updated standpoint to Iceberg's highly emotional and erratic standpoint. Gears remained unaffected while Iceberg was affected to some degree. +1

(account deleted) 08 Jan 2014 03:50

I've heard the rumors about some of the Ketar class SCPs

Decibelles 16 Sep 2015 18:15

Let's see. Dangit, who oversees paychecks?

This is honestly such a great line. I enjoyed it up until then, but this cinched it for me.

Bawower 20 Feb 2021 02:08

This was a nice read. Definitely deserves more upvotes.

+1