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SCP-XXXX Draft. Need crit This concept is an old one but it was instantly posted to the site so now i need to see what was wrong.	by: CreamyPeanutButter 11 Apr 2023 21:04	2	by OriTiefling 11 Apr 2023 21:23 Jump!
The Roadside Riftwalker Basically an SCP about the an uncontained Keter-class extradimensional humanoid entity	by: WarDevourer 11 Apr 2023 15:39	3	by OriTiefling 11 Apr 2023 16:09 Jump!
The Ailing Child Of Proteus (10000 words) Can this shapeshifter tell his story before he succumbs?	by: A Brick In A Sock 10 Apr 2023 16:28	4	by A Brick In A Sock 22 Apr 2023 18:38 Jump!
His Shared Sin (~3500 words) An SCP about grief, sins, and the things we do in moments of desperation.	by: cubeflix 10 Apr 2023 13:33	10	by cubeflix 08 May 2023 13:37 Jump!
A Hole For A Heart Pt.2 Apotheosis tale. Takes place around the early events of the Apotheosis canon	by: Strange Matter 10 Apr 2023 07:01	2	by Zyn 17 Apr 2023 07:22 Jump!
-looking for crit- Scp-6253 (234 words) (First SCP) A cognitively hazardous book said to disrupt human psyche	by: Hy25 09 Apr 2023 18:31	3	by OriTiefling 09 Apr 2023 20:06 Jump!
The Oils of War (SCP-2068 Rewrite) An oil pump that personifies the Iraq War. (3300 words)	by: Kothardarastrix 07 Apr 2023 04:00	3	by Zoobeeny 15 Apr 2023 15:13 Jump!
Swampy Action (Working Title) Simple action-packed adventure dealing with Valravn.	by: Chickadee42 07 Apr 2023 02:40	2	by Zyn 14 Apr 2023 06:57 Jump!
[SEEKING CRITIQUE] Happy Reailty This is my first SCP. My SCP is about a girl who can travel realities but can only do so when mentally unstable.	by: Scoutus 07 Apr 2023 02:06	2	by THExXROSEXx 08 Apr 2023 04:14 Jump!
The reality prisioner	by: tyrantofsouls 07 Apr 2023 01:25	5	by tyrantofsouls 08 Apr 2023 04:50 Jump!
Cetacean Conjurers A pod of orcas discovers magic. ~400 words	by: towwl 06 Apr 2023 21:24	2	by Chickadee42 07 Apr 2023 02:52 Jump!
first tale: Personal Terminal-u7	by: nightbaby6 05 Apr 2023 15:02	2	by Zyn 06 Apr 2023 07:03 Jump!
Her Four Extinctions/Her Old Soldiers. Four Elemental Entities Harbinger Humanities Extinction.	by: Arclund 04 Apr 2023 19:37	8	by Arclund 06 Apr 2023 18:46 Jump!
crazy crawlies (seeking greenlighting and feedback) i'm a newer writer, but not completely new, so i need some feedback	by: jacob bruh 04 Apr 2023 14:37	7	by Harriet Farrar 04 Apr 2023 17:03 Jump!
hey there working on a new SCP-J instance feel free to take a look	by: taurusian 99924 03 Apr 2023 16:39	2	by DrRevan 03 Apr 2023 18:04 Jump!
-Seeking Crit- A Retired Overlord by Shidyk An "evil overlord" seeks retirement at the Foundation	by: Shidyk 03 Apr 2023 15:37	3	by Shidyk 10 Apr 2023 16:52 Jump!
Brood What does it mean to be happy in the Foundation?	by: Laszloo 02 Apr 2023 17:31	8	by Zoobeeny 11 Apr 2023 22:12 Jump!
SEEKING GREENLIGHT 'THE DARK HOUND'	by: Lord_UltraCard 02 Apr 2023 16:08	2	by JorgeMtzb 02 Apr 2023 22:20 Jump!
Page 194 (1100 Word Tale) K/O Failure Scenario commences, the Great Fist (Administrator Equivalent) writes his final remarks	by: Some Reference 01 Apr 2023 21:20	3	by Some Reference 02 Apr 2023 19:00 Jump!
Chocolate Addicted Ants a tube of dark chocolate syrup that causes ants to manifest that swarm around it.	by: pooginawa 30 Mar 2023 08:19	2	by OriTiefling 30 Mar 2023 13:55 Jump!