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Seeking Greenlight	by: Lord_UltraCard 22 Feb 2023 15:35	2	by OriTiefling 22 Feb 2023 15:39 Jump!
[SEEKING CRITIQUE] Happy Reailty This is my first SCP. My SCP is about a girl who can travel realities but can only do so when mentally unstable.	by: Scoutus 22 Feb 2023 03:05	3	by Reverend Fox 22 Feb 2023 15:56 Jump!
Ghosts are Killing You- Greenlights and feedback A ghost boy is left all alone as his family moves on.	by: oddgood 22 Feb 2023 01:33	2	by DrRevan 22 Feb 2023 04:57 Jump!
A dreadfully relaxing bath It's about a bath that someone cannot resist getting into	by: Orla Seraph 21 Feb 2023 17:54	2	by Uncle Nicolini 21 Feb 2023 18:49 Jump!
SCP based on a Brazilian myth	by: Commluke1 21 Feb 2023 04:22	5	by SYTYCFanon 27 Feb 2023 06:00 Jump!
SCP-7131 proposal This is known as the hunter in white, can you tell me how you like it or how to improve it.	by: Mratomic-101 20 Feb 2023 12:27	2	by stormfallen 20 Feb 2023 13:17 Jump!
Beatdown Broadcast "Beatwave" is an anomalous radio signal that causes physical harm to anyone who listens to it.	by: SilverBlade24 20 Feb 2023 08:20	9	by SilverBlade24 16 Mar 2023 22:40 Jump!
Enveloping the Town Letters from a house lure people into a cult.	by: Kignak 19 Feb 2023 23:33	4	by Kignak 20 Feb 2023 20:54 Jump!
A Job Opportunity (∼1500 skip)	by: Some Reference 19 Feb 2023 17:11	6	by Some Reference 28 Feb 2023 00:30 Jump!
SCP-8801 I don't expect it to be accepted, I just want to know if its a good article	by: NoNameSlav 19 Feb 2023 16:07	3	by OriTiefling 19 Feb 2023 17:17 Jump!
Alive (5.1k word tale) A member of Foundation personnel wakes up in a strange place with no memories, and rediscovers who they are.	by: OriTiefling 19 Feb 2023 03:00	2	by ExiAsWell 19 Feb 2023 06:19 Jump!
Ever Higher A researcher struggling with self doubt eventually manifests it physically	by: ParallelPotatoes 19 Feb 2023 02:43	4	by Roufhous 20 Feb 2023 01:53 Jump!
All is Fake A volatile 17 year old boy who can only manipulate technology that he comes in contact with.	by: Pepable 18 Feb 2023 10:25	7	by Pepable 08 Mar 2023 00:59 Jump!
Seeking Critique and Feedback on an SCP-002 Tale	by: DoggoDoggoPupper1 18 Feb 2023 05:54	2	by OriTiefling 18 Feb 2023 06:49 Jump!
Seeking Critique and Feedback A watch that doesn't just tell time, it manipulates it.	by: MrBeom-Seok 17 Feb 2023 23:55	2	by Zyn 21 Feb 2023 07:34 Jump!
Draft Critique This is my first draft, already gone through the greenlighting process.	by: Spookiepoopie 17 Feb 2023 14:40	3	by Zyn 18 Feb 2023 08:20 Jump!
I need feedback on this draft I made Here is the link:	by: A6Seven 16 Feb 2023 19:38	2	by DrRevan 17 Feb 2023 00:35 Jump!
Seeking Critique [Parodying Personalities, SCP-XXXX] Looking for criticism on an idea for a SCP	by: SuperCman5000 16 Feb 2023 19:17	2	by DrRevan 17 Feb 2023 04:02 Jump!
Seeking Critique [I can’t shoot lasers out of my eyes, asshole!, SCP-XXXX] Looking for critique	by: DukeRum 16 Feb 2023 15:08	4	by DukeRum 27 Feb 2023 19:28 Jump!
A Hivemind of Human-Faced Crows/The Brotherhood of One A cult turned themselves into crow-creatures.	by: KKJohnsson 15 Feb 2023 01:10	5	by KKJohnsson 02 Mar 2023 23:30 Jump!