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SCP Draft Crit Request: lyfe kontrol by dado dado is in self-help business yes	by: DrMegsMarvelle 01 May 2022 21:37	3	by DrMegsMarvelle 02 May 2022 23:41 Jump!
Japanese Idol Worms and VTubers Worms looking like idols emerge from their fans' skins. Are VTubers the answer? 3K long	by: Veralta 26 Apr 2022 19:51	5	by Veralta 02 May 2022 04:52 Jump!
A Hole to the Center of the Earth Mystery/horror based SCP. Looking for critique!	by: swordlover87 28 Apr 2022 22:57	4	by swordlover87 01 May 2022 19:40 Jump!
Caught Redhanded Short SCP about self containing protocol measures	by: SleepSpell 24 Apr 2022 01:36	2	by Zyn 01 May 2022 07:37 Jump!
Violet Ashes, 9.5k word tale. A tale about a D-Class tasked to research an SCP.	by: slurppp 01 May 2022 01:00	3	by slurppp 01 May 2022 03:04 Jump!
Broken Home for Imaginary Friends (Draft Review) "Make the Difference you Didn't!"	by: SadfaCe Teef 27 Apr 2022 02:18	2	by Fireknight 30 Apr 2022 20:46 Jump!
Seeking critique- anomalous washing machine	by: Admiral Sand 29 Apr 2022 17:34	2	by Zoobeeny 30 Apr 2022 02:55 Jump!
[SEEKING CRITIQUES] The Stars and I The girl falls from her heavens. The light hides away.	by: Dimadude 25 Apr 2022 17:04	3	by Dimadude 28 Apr 2022 18:26 Jump!
- Ouroboros - Under the floor of the universe, we found a god. So we went inside it.	by: September55th 25 Apr 2022 02:47	2	by Voiiiii 28 Apr 2022 11:03 Jump!
I need some help. I'm new, and I'm dumb. I wish to know how to create a 'decent' SCP. Here's an idea I want to run by through here.	by: Redmiguelito 27 Apr 2022 09:14	4	by Zyn 28 Apr 2022 06:22 Jump!
[SEEKING CRITIQUE] Saint Hubertus and the hole to another place Roman LARPers stand between Europa and Daemonic forces	by: Dr Phil McClaw 27 Apr 2022 09:43	6	by andromedaz 28 Apr 2022 04:47 Jump!
Self-improvement gurus SUCK! Cold showers are a scam.	by: andromedaz 25 Apr 2022 17:30	5	by andromedaz 28 Apr 2022 03:44 Jump!
The A-maize-ing Harvester's Labyrinth. Skip here is initially a spooky dangerous corn maze	by: RealSurrealSir 25 Apr 2022 22:36	3	by RealSurrealSir 27 Apr 2022 02:59 Jump!
Inverted Swiss Cheese A tale about the Surrealistics Department	by: Ethagon 19 Apr 2022 16:19	5	by Ethagon 26 Apr 2022 18:04 Jump!
[SEEKING CRITIQUE] Fortune Luck and rituals surrounding transfer of luck go awry when the council become luck gods	by: guiness11 18 Apr 2022 16:01	2	by Zyn 26 Apr 2022 06:18 Jump!
...but with a whimper A far out vibey, mostly character driven SCP about the end of it all. About 2k words.	by: Johnny_Tetris 25 Apr 2022 15:52	2	by Roufhous 25 Apr 2022 22:01 Jump!
Termites, Inc termites	by: Nanec 04 Apr 2022 17:52	7	by REDESERT 25 Apr 2022 14:47 Jump!
My first SCP plz help with grammer, and or adetions to the story, sorry for the the miss spelling i was a bit drunk while writing	by: Professor Tau 24 Apr 2022 10:46	4	by Zyn 25 Apr 2022 07:13 Jump!
Request for Tale Draft Crit: Final Thoughts, Again final thoughts of a Foundation Researcher, with a twist	by: DrMegsMarvelle 21 Apr 2022 06:24	5	by DrMegsMarvelle 24 Apr 2022 14:26 Jump!
[Seeking Critique] A Threat from the Deep A dangerous creature from the depths of the ocean suddenly surfaced near Guam.	by: JohnTAD 16 Apr 2022 13:12	2	by Zyn 24 Apr 2022 06:12 Jump!