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Do you like it or not? Rate it please.	by: Anna154 12 Nov 2023 15:45	2	by Zyn 13 Nov 2023 08:23 Jump!
My SCP draft about a brick human. Need greenlight/ feedback. It’s a guy called BrickBob, who can warp certain materials to his favor.	by: Cultnan0 12 Nov 2023 16:59	3	by Zyn 13 Nov 2023 08:09 Jump!
Angels of the Broken God [Seeking Crits] A collab between four semi new authors	by: DrSoot77 03 Nov 2023 16:22	2	by Zyn 11 Nov 2023 07:49 Jump!
ListeningAkasha; looking for constructive criticism and way to improve my article	by: ListeningAkasha 10 Nov 2023 12:18	4	by SunnyDKnight 10 Nov 2023 20:56 Jump!
I Didn't Forget Pt 9: The Wanderer's Library	by: XHAWK77X 21 Oct 2023 00:54	3	by NicoTheMediocre 09 Nov 2023 17:19 Jump!
Human Meat Grinder draft My very first SCP Draft from SCP Sandbox-III hope you guys like it enough to be greenlit!	by: DrHurst 08 Nov 2023 23:05	2	by Zyn 09 Nov 2023 08:06 Jump!
Youtube Kids Be Like A Broken Masquerade skip involving Westhead Media and the exploitative content within YouTube Kids. 2,164 words.	by: newnykacolaquantum 24 Aug 2023 13:10	3	by Fallenstar004 09 Nov 2023 07:14 Jump!
What should I change/add to my basically finished SCP draft? I am looking for suggestions or things I should change on my basically finished SCP draft.	by: Cultnan0 07 Nov 2023 19:55	2	by OriTiefling 07 Nov 2023 23:38 Jump!
UNPROTECTED... FROM THE LORD'S YETIS I hope you don't think this is over the top.	by: alanthechair 30 Oct 2023 13:02	3	by Zoobeeny 05 Nov 2023 18:43 Jump!
Never Upload Your Bombers to the Cloud A red cloud which destroys cities with bomber aircraft.	by: Edmund Davids 18 Oct 2023 08:23	11	by Edmund Davids 05 Nov 2023 00:56 Jump!
Permission asked for my new SCP-7284 Asking for permission for my new SCP	by: jxfdx 03 Nov 2023 12:26	4	by Zyn 04 Nov 2023 07:28 Jump!
Not sure what to call it honestly I need a title for it and would like some help with dialogue, thanks	by: Error_Code_267 03 Nov 2023 09:43	2	by Zyn 04 Nov 2023 07:13 Jump!
S & C Plastics RomCom/ Workplace Comedy Wanted to write something very slice-of-life.	by: WhoIsCthulhu 24 Oct 2023 22:47	4	by DrBandana 02 Nov 2023 18:28 Jump!
Ideas and Reviews Hoi, I'm new to the foundation and I need a few ideas	by: SunnyDKnight 01 Nov 2023 13:58	4	by Zoobeeny 01 Nov 2023 15:02 Jump!
Fall Witness Fae schemes and trickery. Part of the Cycle of Seasons series	by: Ethagon 24 Oct 2023 19:13	2	by Zyn 01 Nov 2023 07:18 Jump!
From Within A story of an MTF squad dealing with another world, the monsters within, and the coldness of the bureaucracy of the foundation and the 05.	by: MadBenYT 31 Oct 2023 21:21	2	by Zoobeeny 31 Oct 2023 21:32 Jump!
We Tainted Few Relatively long skip about Heaven & Hell.	by: kingmeatballs 27 Oct 2023 12:18	2	by Stealth000 31 Oct 2023 06:59 Jump!
[SEEKING GREENLIGHTS] A Heavenly Pleasure	by: 2b2tEternalLegend 26 Oct 2023 23:22	2	by 2b2tEternalLegend 27 Oct 2023 10:44 Jump!
Greenlight permission SCP-7822 Funni wood falling make u laugh really hard pls don make it angry	by: ThyZyketh 26 Oct 2023 23:47	2	by OriTiefling 27 Oct 2023 01:12 Jump!
Mr. Gold A Failed Wondertainment product and a sign of a new line of a fan favorite Wondertainment product.	by: Seeks 26 Oct 2023 19:44	3	by Seeks 26 Oct 2023 19:57 Jump!