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So, does this SCP work or not? it's in my sandbox waiting for your advice.	by: sandrewswann 05 May 2012 02:43	2	by Jasper Quartz 05 May 2012 03:15 Jump!
Here we go again... Yes, I'm trying another SCP...	by: Deacon_Blues_117 04 May 2012 22:31	4	by XHAWK77X 08 May 2012 08:36 Jump!
New SCP looking for feedback!	by: SiriExMachina 04 May 2012 22:16	2	by Jasper Quartz 05 May 2012 01:02 Jump!
Sandbox SCP Feedback please.	by: ArthurWilborn 04 May 2012 19:06	1
The Drinking Contest: criticism welcome Looking for any further improvements on this second draft of mine	by: Esperion 04 May 2012 19:02	1
It's a Walkman, again! not to be confused with SCP-1248	by: cry_owl 04 May 2012 10:46	4	by maninahat 05 May 2012 22:43 Jump!
My first draft- Please don't hold back your hatred! 1676, the Carnivorus Carbon, hits the scene! (and hopefully sticks to it)	by: SuperShadeyin 04 May 2012 04:51	5	by SuperShadeyin 04 May 2012 20:52 Jump!
Story needs a little 'kick'... ...but hopefully not a kick out the door.	by: ajru222 04 May 2012 04:06	8	by ajru222 04 May 2012 22:11 Jump!
Lost Cabin A work-in-progress	by: Sarai_Seneschal 04 May 2012 03:14	4	by Sarai_Seneschal 04 May 2012 22:45 Jump!
The World's 'Friendliest' SCP I saw the 'SCP that makes people like them' thing in the guide, and decided to see if I could make that somewhat horrifying. I'd like to see what other people think.	by: Aero_Grillos 03 May 2012 03:56	4	by Aero_Grillos 05 May 2012 04:25 Jump!
Tone Test Just a test on getting into the Foundation's clinical tone	by: Hiro Dark 03 May 2012 01:56	2	by pauli133 03 May 2012 02:14 Jump!
SCP Draft- The Projector In Which The Newb Realizes They Messed Up Where This Should Go	by: PiFace 02 May 2012 21:43	1
Requesting feedback	by: genesplicer 02 May 2012 21:27	2	by genesplicer 03 May 2012 16:28 Jump!
Dangerous Light	by: MookVanguard 02 May 2012 20:28	2	by MookVanguard 03 May 2012 01:11 Jump!
SCP I am working on. Please comment on how I can make it better.	by: Gabriel Rodriguez 02 May 2012 15:32	13	by Gabriel Rodriguez 04 May 2012 00:01 Jump!
What a dummy - critical viewing appreciated Any advice, help with tone etc. welcome	by: Crayne 02 May 2012 09:09	5	by Crayne 05 May 2012 09:40 Jump!
SCP-1967 preview first draft thing	by: SirCure 02 May 2012 00:36	3	by SirCure 02 May 2012 00:47 Jump!
My first SCP- preview. So, the time has come for me to make an SCP, and I'd like early feedback. Currently just some containment guidelines and a partial description, any fixes ideas, and especially pictures are welcome.	by: SuperShadeyin 01 May 2012 22:13	1
Okay, this time for real Augh he's back kill it with fireee...but seriously I'm back with the radiator	by: BlindspotFuzz 01 May 2012 19:32	7	by BlindspotFuzz 08 May 2012 13:05 Jump!
The Deadly Painting (feedback please) A painting of a dark corridor that abducts people who sleep near it.	by: evilscary 01 May 2012 16:29	2	by Aero_Grillos 03 May 2012 04:33 Jump!