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Here's my review


tl,dr: It's boring, a LOT of grammar/spelling mistakes, logic errors, and formatting problems. I think literally every sentence had a problem in it

1.5/10

I highly suggest you focus your time on learning English better than using this site. If you do continue to write, I suggest using grammar/spelling checking software, along with posting a draft to the Drafts and Critiques board on the forum.

Best of luck!

by Shadow9771Shadow9771, 26 Sep 2017 18:15

Damn, I feel bad for the guy, but when he shot himself he saw another researcher!, the one he shot, that will make a great test to see if that would happend again and try to get more info about him

by Agent_Mike smithAgent_Mike smith, 26 Sep 2017 18:09

Alright, let's do this.

I'm MasterProject, but some call me "Master" or "MP". I'm a guy.

I've come across this site a long time ago, maybe 2012-2013. I had heard about it in a forum thread, people were talking about SCP-173.

I stopped reading for a while until last year. I somehow got immersed in it again and continued my reading spree. One day, I had an idea for an SCP and decided to finally make an account.

Now, I'm here.

I like mind-affecting SCPs (like "I am a Toaster", "This is a Miror" and SCP-055) and space-bending ones (like "IKEA Maze", "The Stairwell" and SCP-639).

I intend to mostly read, create SCPs from time to time, and maybe write some tales.

For the dance question, I'd say irish dance. It seems cool and fun.

This is very amusing.

by DecibellesDecibelles, 26 Sep 2017 17:57

Alright. I've just gotten complaints that I'm not getting his speech down.

Thanks.

Re: Spanko's Speech by ianofdoom2ianofdoom2, 26 Sep 2017 17:50

To me, there's nothing particularly striking about it - the concept alone is basically a monster that kills randomly, with no strong narrative. There's a lot that needs to be improved about it, which is why people are encouraged to seek feedback before posting - it would have helped you identify a lot of SPaG issues, as well as the concept being very similar to Series I ideas.

by Zachary MaxwellZachary Maxwell, 26 Sep 2017 17:48

Very nice. I'm not sure why he didn't try saying the name of a Precinct or zone, or a letter or number though. Maybe he thought it was some kind of test? Or maybe he was recruited as D-Class for being a Dadaist. Either way, +1. Keep up the good work, you wonderful strange person!

by AgentWilsonAgentWilson, 26 Sep 2017 17:46

You can always run text through Grammarly to spell/grammar check your writings.

Re: Scp 3902, W. D. Argent by Shadow9771Shadow9771, 26 Sep 2017 17:44

Was their anything good about it?


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by Meowmere505Meowmere505, 26 Sep 2017 17:43
PunkiePunkie 26 Sep 2017 17:38
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-3248

Have you, by any chance, shared your scip on the drafts and critiques forum or the help chat before time of publishing?

by PunkiePunkie, 26 Sep 2017 17:38

Okay - did you seek feedback prior to posting?

by Zachary MaxwellZachary Maxwell, 26 Sep 2017 17:34

Sort of, i was going to press preview but then i miss pressed save and i took it down as quick as possible and completed it.


Hello their this is my Signature and I put a capitol their for no reason
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by Meowmere505Meowmere505, 26 Sep 2017 17:31

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Hello their this is my Signature and I put a capitol their for no reason
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by Meowmere505Meowmere505, 26 Sep 2017 17:30

Is this the second time you've posted the same article?

by Zachary MaxwellZachary Maxwell, 26 Sep 2017 17:27

Excellently written and engaging. My only comment is how unlikely it would be that a poem written in Turkmen would keep meter and rhyme scheme when translated. +1 anyway.

by AgentWilsonAgentWilson, 26 Sep 2017 17:27

*Sigh* Just tell me what i did wrong this time?


Hello their this is my Signature and I put a capitol their for no reason
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by Meowmere505Meowmere505, 26 Sep 2017 17:25

Thank you, sorry for the inconvenience.

Re: Staff Post by deepdishattackdeepdishattack, 26 Sep 2017 17:22
  • "in the west wall, standard" the comma should be a period
  • "to breach containment, when SCP-3103" same thing here, have a period instead of a comma
  • "SCP-3103 is not to be provided ( random paragraph break )amenities unless it is cooperative with testing" what amenities? does it need to eat? if so, what does it eat.
  • dont use the term "gargoyle" it doesn't sound very scientific. instead, be more specific (is it a biped, or quadruped?)
  • how did they catch it, and what was the story behind it?
  • "it appears that SCP can repair damage done to it by drawing cement from other sources being set or not" could you be more specific? how and why does it do this?
  • is the SCP hostile? why do they need to keep it locked up in the first place?

yeah


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by Communism will winCommunism will win, 26 Sep 2017 17:20

SCP-3248 Not So Electric Eel has been posted


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