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this is an scp idea I ahd tell me what you think
Okay, I read through the draft……. What exactly does it do? I mean from the looks of this, (And it looks quite rushed, might I add, take a breath and slow down a bit) the gum turns people into dragons?
There are A-LOT of tonal errors and little to no punctuation whatsoever, but that's for the draft forum.
KILLER KING, as per this forum's guidelines:
Please don't just link us a sandbox draft. Give us a quick explanation of the concept. We don't need to see all the complicated details that would be present in a draft; we're helping out with the core idea. Link a sandbox only as optional reading or if a reviewer asks for it.
If you want to have a sandbox draft reviewed, go to the drafting forum.
Please follow the forum instructions and post a quick synopsis of your idea.
Additionally, what grade are you currently in at school? Most successful SCP authors have at least some college-level writing experience, since clinical tone is typically covered in college. If you haven’t encountered clinical tone or writing analytical essays in school yet, it can be hard to write an article that possesses the unique "flash fiction as written by a professional scientist" tone the site audience is looking for. If you tell us where you are academically, we can recommend some materials you can study up on, such as these college resources for clinical tone:
http://www.aje.com/en/arc/editing-tip-maintaining-formal-tone-scientific-writing/
http://academicguides.waldenu.edu/writingcenter/scholarlyvoice/tone
https://healthcare.utah.edu/brand-and-style-guide/writing-guide.php
also I'm in functional skills at college
its an chewing gum that turns people into dragons
it doesn't work on anyone else other than the person who received it from DR wondertainment
How is turning people into dragons kid-friendly? Wouldn't it be more dangerous and traumatic than fun? Furthermore, if it only works on certain recipients, how would the Foundation figure out all the effects? Wouldn't most kids need their parents to buy them stuff anyway?
hmm that is very true but that's not always the case cause what If the child buys it from the shop or an ice cream truck as they sell sweets as well
mnight actually see about adding DR bright for shenanigans
KILLER KING, instead of posting multiple comments in succession, please edit your previous post using the "edit" function under the "options" tab to the lower right of every comment. That prevents spam buildup, and it's in the rules.
it is no longer a dr wondertainment product
As per the Ideas and Brainstorming forum guidelines: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-1019200/how-to-use-this-forum-ideas
| Please don't just link us a sandbox draft. Give us a quick explanation of the concept. We don't need to see all the complicated details that would be present in a draft; we're helping out with the core idea. Link a sandbox only as optional reading or if a reviewer asks for it. |
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should I make this a gamers against weed
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