Let Her Heart DEET Once More / Discussion

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OthellotheCat 29 Aug 2018 05:00

My first entry into the OCT!

This will be the start of a series regardless of if I manage to make it to the next round or not, so I hope you all enjoy!

Thanks to Gabriel Jade for giving a big hand with 049's characterization and giving me help with writing!

Also thanks to Weryllium, Fieldstone, DrChandra, FloppyPhoenix, Yossi, Uncle Nicolini, Captain Kirby, Tset, Not_A_Seagull, Rimple, Stallmantic, and anyone who I happened to miss if I did for critting it and helping out!

I hope you enjoy!

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Genshed 30 Aug 2018 00:33

Oh, this was most enjoyable. You made a heartwarming tale about 049. That is an impressive achievement.

DrDromeus 30 Aug 2018 01:52

No fair you’re not supposed to release your OCT tale so soon after the start. Why don’t you just wait until minutes before the deadline like the rest of us? Making us all look bad

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OthellotheCat 30 Aug 2018 01:55

You gotta release it at the exact minute they allow it

I waited until August 28th 11:59 CST and I was READY

(But thank you for upvoting :D)

DrDromeus 30 Aug 2018 01:58

Yeah and I’ll be waiting until September 4th 11:59 CST and I will be VERY UNREADY.

OthellotheCat 30 Aug 2018 02:00

You got this! Sure, you might have to include some pretty unique characters in your tale, but you'll do great!

DrDromeus 30 Aug 2018 02:34

Thanks! However, I’m really excited to work with these characters- the comedic potential is gold! But back to your tale, your characterization of 049 and his allegiance to the Foundation is well-done, and I’m very excited to see what will happen next.

OthellotheCat 30 Aug 2018 02:43

I hope I'll be in a position where I get to write what happens next!

mlister 31 Aug 2018 19:32

For posterity's sake:

Mhm, novoting.
The dialogue was a bit off, and at times it was too "Tell, don't show"
Otherwise fine, and some good buildup

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Myhcroft 23 Mar 2019 06:20

So glad Leslie survived! :D

altt 19 May 2019 16:42

Oh man, this is so adorable. Please please please tell me they told him who Leslie Caron is, and then promptly let him watch a few of her movies, shows, whatever. I will die of happiness.