Thanks to Djoric and Ihpkmn for taking a look at this, and for establishing the setting.
Date: 06 Apr 2013 08:19
Number of posts: 28
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No idea what to think of this one. Ask me again in the morning.
I don't feel like the disclaimer at the top is necessary. It's just some teens bullshitting each other. Nothing really explicit. Unless I missed something.
Better safe than sorry, I reckon. And the tale page does recommend it.
I recognize that this is super tame compared to say, Treats, so unless there's anyone who particularly needed the heads-up, I'll remove the disclaimer by sometime tomorrow.
I was expecting gore, rape, and child torture with the disclaimer. There is nothing in here that warrants "themes of adult nature". Further, I find this thing purple prosed to hell and back. If I were not on my phone I would point out specifics but yah.I just felt nothing.
Living the dream, or dreaming the life?
"Ah fuck," Mary-Ann grumbled. It was time to file taxes.
See? Coarse language and adult themes!
e: But for real, remove that.
Oy! None of that tax-filing filth on the forums! This is a civilized community, dammit!
So she filled out her 1040 form and then went to cuddle on the couch with her husband and watch Lincoln.
SHUT UP DMATIX YOU AREN'T MY REAL DAD.
e: Back to the tale at hand, I do really love the end bit where it's all explained as rats or swamp gas or a weather balloon.