SCP-323 / Discussion

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(account deleted) 19 Jan 2013 23:38

After a long period of distraction, I've finally finished the rewrite of SCP-323. Enjoy my polished thing what makes you crazy and kills you.

Lots of thanks to ShockwaveLover for some editing while I was incapped on my tablet, Faminepulse for the shoop, the audio recording, and most of the interview, and Salmander for checking I did my research.

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Djoric 19 Jan 2013 23:42

Picture's not loading for me, but upvoted anyway.

RJB_R 19 Jan 2013 23:44

I had to upload it.

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Communism will win 20 Jan 2013 00:12

SCP-323 is to be kept a 17m x 17m x 3m

Picture doesn't match containment procedures, either.

That being said, this is nicely atmospheric. Plus the imagery of 323-1 just really gets to me.

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(account deleted) 20 Jan 2013 00:19

Fixed with a caption change.

Thank you, I appreciate it. I had a lot of trouble pulling this off, so I'm happy it's doing what I set out for.

StevenThePotato 20 Jan 2013 00:19

This is definitely much better than the original! +1

Salman Corbette 20 Jan 2013 00:35

I'm glad you changed the audio log. Much more Wendigo-ish.

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(account deleted) 20 Jan 2013 00:42

Now I just have to find somebody who can turn it into an actual audio log.

Sal? Famine?

Salman Corbette 20 Jan 2013 00:57

Ok, here's a few samples, tell me which you like best:

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1Z25IcYYA7d

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1dQ1tfVue7k

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0GpueoTa3PV

http://vocaroo.com/i/s15IL6fr4P4g

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0ngOWyOSs1P

(account deleted) 20 Jan 2013 01:20

The Batman one was my favorite.

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Communism will win 20 Jan 2013 20:30

GLORIOUS

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(account deleted) 20 Jan 2013 20:33

Batman.

(account deleted) 21 Jan 2013 02:08

I liked the really jaded dude voice myself.

Khym Chanur 20 Jan 2013 01:27

So this was an attempt by some Native Americans to weaponize a Wendigo for use against those who had taken their land? If so, shouldn't the thing be hostile towards those who look Caucasian, rather than those who speak English or French?

transparent armor

Do you mean bullet resistant glass? If so, it should probably just say so. If the Foundation has some sort of transparent armor more advance than mere bullet resistant glass, that should be made clear.

(account deleted) 20 Jan 2013 01:44

You got the first part mostly right, but the English/French thing was more on the idea that those who've taken to the European ideals, including those natives learning the language, are more easily influenced because of their already chaotic and murdering nature. It was a failed effort to weaponized a wendigo, yes, but it was meant to fight enemy tribes and enemy Europeans alike.

In regards to the transparent glass, yes, that's what that is - but the last time I used it, Echo told me to call it transparent armor. I'm more inclined to listen to the military buff guy.

ProcyonLotor 20 Jan 2013 18:45

Didn't like the original at all, but this is a pretty good rewrite. Upvote from me.

Libraryseraph 20 Jan 2013 21:44

Well, I will admit to having a soft spot for the original, but this is way more concise and makes more sense. I like it

Dr Cuddles 20 Jan 2013 23:22

I like it. Much better than the original (and better than my own attempt on the subject).

Dr Cuddles 20 Jan 2013 23:54

The idea about language is good but could be clarified a bit.
The way I read the text, anyone may be turned into 323-1. When you write "the violent reaction towards speakers of the French and English…" do you mean they become more susceptible to the effects or are they being attacked by the skull?

(account deleted) 20 Jan 2013 23:56

Anyone may be turned into SCP-323-1, that is correct. As for violent reaction, the implication was that it would attempt to lunge at them, but the lunging itself is an effort to try to infect them itself, rather than letting its effect do the work.

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