Following up from my post on the brain storming forum (my apologies to Zyn), here's a first draft of my first-ever SCP write-up. I'm not writing this to say "I wrote an SCP" (thought that will be cool), but rather because I got the idea after reading The Young Man and now it just won't leave me alone. Anything that would help the concept better come to life would be greatly appreciated. Edit- Thinking a bit more about it, I'm somewhat paralyzed by my options in terms of how I could end up further fleshing this out. I'd like to keep the whole thing fairly succinct, so I'm going to try and limit what I put in for the initial document.
Sandbox with draft: http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/notadamsel
Post to Brain storming forum: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-6022872/barbed-wire-field
Line from The Young Man, for the lazy: "They moved fast and low, from crater to crater, slipping over slick mud and barbed wire, the only thing that seemed to grow in that blasted waste."
