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Item #: SCP-3948, Object Class: GIF89ad Special Containment Procedures: PåáàààÃàäJJJÃ≈ÜIDàRTL«««–IMÑ_ ‚„ÿœµØå∆≤∞N)*)))kJJådd(&®ää˝ÊïkkkëêI√¨Üé*,ı…?. ÊÊÊE3¶fdjU»ãjcQ¢áJl()fÍ⁄§££∆wyˆ™≠Ëàâápp¨¨´”$)ÓÌÌß Ú⁄?+úàmóñê±KL⁄⁄⁄∞+-Ùı?´ùê«°NBBAF98ÃBi
Description: Á«≠«ƒ∑ıÈ—YYYedcâDDñppOn““—ßârBAÕeg◊¥µÕôö6?ΩΩ83g78ÍÅÁw yÊ∏πíêê) Á„∑ ßßq‘ÃCÓ’œâŸ’∂ã£hWR´ln˜òõ∂∂µ˝˝, -23 and three staff votes. Apoplexic has volunteered a rewrite.
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My main problem here is that this is just nigh-incomprehensible. If there's a story here, most readers won't sift through all of this just to find it.
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I'd like to take a shot at a rewrite of this. I've messaged DrSee for permission, and to start a dialogue on their concept; I believe the idea is viable, but some of the complex expressions aren't being properly translated (in addition to the incorrect formatting used). This is apparently fairly high rated on the CN wiki, and I'd hate to see a language barrier stop what could be a solid article here, too.
E: Do I have to post this on each of the supplement pages as well?
As an aside to the general public, if anyone with some capacity to translate Chinese would be interested in helping with this, I would greatly appreciate a PM.
EE: I have the raw edit text as well as the page sources copied from all six of these, and the author and translator from above have joined me in a sandbox.
SCP-3352 is a hardbound book, measuring 10cm by 25cm containing exactly 13 pages. When allowed to open by a human, SCP-3352 causes sudden and intense triskaidekaphobia1. This effect is instantaneous, and manifests first as explicit disgust of SCP-3352 itself. Afflicted individuals will begin to compulsively notice patterns relating to the number 13. Early affliction is specific to numerals, pictograms, and verbalization of the number 13, -18 and three staff votes.
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It was decent, my only problem was the emptiness of it. The idea itself was decent but I think it could have been presented better. Is there anything to counteract it? Will amnestics stop it? Answering questions like these could improve it a whole lot.
I'm not feeling it. It didn't seem like the idea was explored in any sort of interesting direction beyond the surface level to me. Nothing really caught me and made me want to know more about this object or wonder what its story was.
I feel like this would be enough for me if it had a killer final line to induce a strong reaction, having it resurge indefinitely wasn't that interesting a note to end on.
well written, and an idea with potential, but this is just a less interesting SCP-999-JP, along with being not much more than a "thing that makes you go crazy."
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i mean, i was moreso citing it as an example that the concept could have been done better than saying that this was a rip-off
i realize now that that is completely not what i said but that is what i meant
You know as someone who has a particular affinity for the number 13 this one just didn't grab me. It's not interesting enough on its own to get by without a twist and there is no twist. That said this is the 13th comment and the thing is -13. That's gotta count for something.
The 1st Edition, Please be careful Please be careful For the last containment, be careful SCP-39481
Item #: SCP-3948 Object Class: Explained Special Containment Procedures: None Description: None, Actually, you shouldn’t be seeing these words. Maybe it’s because our last procedures did not fulfill its purpose. After all, was it…still breached. Ah, that was not a question, but a statement, -17 and three staff votes.
SCP-3904 is a Synthetic eyeball originally found in ██████, Ohio. This eyeball instantly severs the retina if viewed directly photos and videos are view-able, however.. The method of how the retina is severed is not well understood, but is believed to be at the molecular level. Dr. ███████ has developed several theorems on the occurrence of the severage, but none have been proven. The strangest quality of SCP-3904 is that blind subjects can restore their vision by standing within a twenty meter radius of SCP-3904 and temporarily see, even when leaving the area, -16 and three staff votes.
SCP-3392 is a fully grown instance of Ficus macrophylla of indeterminate age. Unlike other members of the family Moraceae, SCP-3392 develops fruit-shaped growths that consist primarily of calcium carbonate. This behavior has been observed to begin at the meteorological start of a year's Spring season. Once a growth reaches a circumference of roughly 80 centimeters, a random lifeform will hatch. Growth development and further hatching has been observed to last anywhere from 4 weeks to 5 months, -17 and three staff votes.
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Wouldn't this make more sense as an —EX?
The concept definitely has merit, but there's a bunch of issues with it at the moment.
1) Punctuation and general grammar glitches. There's a lack of spaces after punctuation, especially after commas, which makes it weird to read. I've fixed some of them. Also, why is "Oak precessionary moth" capitalized?
2) Species names are always italicized in scientific writing, and this is a scientific document. There's also no need to put a "The" in every footnote.
3) The first paragraph of the containment procedures needs to be relocated— it obfuscates important information in the procedures.
4) Tone issues, such as "got into contact" are prevalent.
I want to upvote this, I really do, but after a reread, I have to no-vote. The idea that platypi were only discovered in 1996 (especially since they were historically hunted for their fur) and the Foundation managed to retroactively insert them into the historical record is just too absurd for me.
Security Clearance Inspection, WARNING: THE CONTENT YOU ARE ABOUT TO ACCESS IS CLASSIFIED ACCESS BY UNAUTHORIZED PERSONNEL IS STRICTLY PROHIBITED PERPETRATORS WILL BE TRACKED, LOCATED, AND DETAINED Your login information is shown below Username Please verify that this account is yours, -14 and three staff votes.
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A neat concept, but the execution could use some work. I like the idea of this…. "scavenger hunt"-esque thing, but the formatting feels too off to be really solid. -1 from me, but I'd love to see a rework.
SCP-3982 is a wooden door coated with a thin layer of white paint, the door is surrounded by a steel frame, that is covering the backside of the door, only leaving one direction of possible entering. a small 'QWERTY' arranged keyboard is attached to the metal frame, which provides an input for SCP-3982. Inputting the desired location and opening the door will reveal the location within the impossible space, for example when the location: 'Honolulu, Hawaii' was input, opening the door revealed a beach in Honolulu, Hawaii, -13 and three staff votes.
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the Doraemon theme song was playing inside my head the whole time I'm reading this and I don't think it's a good sign. This is basically the pink door the titular character used to teleport its small party to anywhere in the world—even space, on several occasion.
also
This SCP is dangerous if used incorrectly.
well no shit, just about anything would be dangerous if used incorrectly, even toothpaste and table salt. For all intent and purpose this is a Safe, Euclid at best, object, coz the containment simply "put it behind blast door and forget about it."
3 sided dice exist.
SCP-3346 is a black, 153.7 cm long pair of headphones, of the in-ear variety. SCP-3346 was originally brought to the attention of the Foundation when embedded agents within the City of ██████ Police Department reported a case in which a teenage boy, 17, died after locking himself in his room to listen to music, being discovered dead several hours afterward. While slightly abnormal, this circumstance in itself did not warrant any Foundation intervention nor give sufficient suspicion of an anomalous object, -11 and three staff votes.
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aside from the occasional usage of the phrase "SCP object" ("anomalous object" would probably work fine) and the thing about it being used to help personnel or pacify other SCPs (not only would the Foundation most likely not do this due to potential unforeseen consequences, this object is much too dangerous to be used as a tool), this is all right.
SCP-3948 is a document containing high infohazard descriptions of a specific anomalous phenomenon. This document cannot be accessed by any personnel, except for those with level 5 clearance. When this document is accessed by any a specific personnel with clearance below level 5, the object’s containment will be breached. If this occurs, the normal functioning of the Foundation’s contingency plans: [SPECIAL CLEARANCE REQUIRED], [SPECIAL CLEARANCE REQUIRED], [SPECIAL CLEARANCE REQUIRED] should be ensured. After the containment breach, the corresponding emergency plan should be in place as soon as possible.
Summarily deleted at -14 for being an orphaned supplement page, with LilyFlower and
ProcyonLotor witnessing.
SCP-3948 is a document containing high infohazard descriptions of a specific anomalous phenomenon. This document cannot be accessed by any personnel, except for those with level 5 clearance. When this document is accessed by any a specific personnel with clearance below level 5, the object’s containment will be breached. If this occurs, the normal functioning of the Foundation’s contingency plans: [SPECIAL CLEARANCE REQUIRED], [SPECIAL CLEARANCE REQUIRED], [SPECIAL CLEARANCE REQUIRED] should be ensured. After the containment breach, the corresponding emergency plan should be in place as soon as possible.
Summarily deleted at -16 for being an orphaned supplement page, with LilyFlower and
ProcyonLotor witnessing.
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Summarily deleted at -12 for being an orphaned supplement page, with LilyFlower and
ProcyonLotor witnessing.
SCP-3907 is a 12 year old male with strange arms, Left hand is a detonator and half of the right arm is a bloody katana. The torso is missing and the shirt’s bottom half is tattered and the item seems to float, the eyes are black with red eye color. Addendum I: If any worker sees SCP-3907 then they are to call the Foundation right away. SCP-3907 also is known to breach millions of SCPs, -21 and three staff votes.
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To be quite honest, I have no idea what you are trying to accomplish with this anomaly. It's some spooky kid, but so what? There are also numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
In the future, please make a sandbox and try to get feedback on any drafts either in the forum or chat. -1.
SCP-3053 is an a4 note made from oak and bambus. The paper note was made by █████ Which is a german paper industry founded by ██████ ████████ █████ in 1867. The note containes a black and white "smiley face" 10cm in diameter. The ink used to draw the face on SCP-3053 is a mixture of oil and plasic with characteristics of age. The age of the ink mixture is estemated to be between 4000 and 4500 years old. If left unobserved the note will flicker onto another surface conecting to the last surface it was on. Atempts to move or destroy the note have met with failure seeing that SCP-3053 returns to its wall after 1minute on the floor. SCP-3053 is visible trough any solid matter, -18 and three staff votes.
SCP-3266 is made out of human tissue, tree bark, human bones, ash, and ████████. SCP-3266 is a tree like figure with unexplainable thorns coming out of its body in all different places. SCP-3266 also has an unusual bone structure that we haven't discovered yet. SCP-3266 has no jaw but tentacle-like branches that come from inside its stomach. SCP-3266 has no eyes and is completely blind but it the only way it can "see" is only through echo location, improper self-delete, cleared by me at -14 with tretter witnessing.
"SCP-3984 is an entity of unknown origins that resides in every-single computer network on the planet", summarily deleted due to improper self-delete at -3 with tretter witnessing.
SCP-3419 summarily deleted by me and witnessed by DrBleep following a failed self-deletion by the author.
SCP-3472 is a Dungeons and Dragons set, consisting of pieces labled from SCP-3472-1 to SCP-3472-15 SCP-3472-1 is an 8m x 8m grided board made out of dirt that cannot be linked to any company. Each grid square is 10 cm x 10 cm. It has terrain that shifts and morphs as SCP-3472-8 through SCP-3472-13 move on SCP-3472-1. All pieces of terrain are made of their real life counterpart, and are connected to the board by unknown means, improper self-delete, cleared by me at -13 with tretter witnessing.
Feedback ported:
1. Lots of grammatical errors, as well as just overall subpar writing. This article could use several revisions. Did you get a draft looked at before posting this?
2. The anomaly itself is poorly explained with how the information is presented.
3. The idea is not very interesting. It's a Dungeons and Dragons board set that works on it's own to avoid needing a DM? It's not very different from say, Jumanji, or Zathura.
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I couldn't come up with any better ideas at the time.
There is no idea that cannot be saved by good execution. That is not present here. There are ways to execute this in an interesting manner (logs or individual descriptions of units would probably help) but ultimately this falls flat because of subpar execution.
just keep in mind, this is my first SCP, I was expecting a lot of errors
If this is the case, consider posting it in the Drafts forum before posting to the main site if you haven't already. You will be able to get feedback there from site members, who will be more than qualified to help your article meet the tone and quality expectations of the site.
