Got two new ideas, Good ideas?/validation

Summary:

Dead feeling dirt, Mysterious music box. Feedback welcome and appreciated.

Got two new ideas, Good ideas?/validation

DrNormal 29 Jul 2012 07:27

"Dirt" - A mound of dirt, kept in a glass jar. whenever being touched by the dirt, anything that has happened to you that can be considered bad, mental or physical, are relived.

"Music box" - when winded up, you can speak any genre, as long as its a clear, not made up genre and it will play it. When trying to find what band wrote/performed the song, it leads you to a random song, not like the on it played. The song it plays, corresponds with the genre you spoke, but the lyrics contain terrible things like, torture, child molestation, murder, etc.
*for Music box, can't really think of the affects of the songs. That's where your suggestions come in.*

Re: Got two new ideas, Good ideas?/validation

Communism will win 29 Jul 2012 08:07

"Dirt" - We have an archived SCP that does this: http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-089-arc

"Music box" - What you have so far sounds like it's trying too hard to be scary. Also, while most writers around here have taken an idea or suggestion from someone else at some point, we really want to see your creativity, so you should probably think of an effect yourself.

Also, before you post anything, please please please get a native English speaker to read through it and correct it all for coherency, grammar, and spelling. Nobody will like your SCP if they can't read it.

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Re: Got two new ideas, Good ideas?/validation

DrNormal 29 Jul 2012 19:55

Thank you, although with the music box, it doesn't necessarily, need to have anything to do with the listed 'terrible' things.
I thought I could maybe add something to it, an affect or something, it was just a basic idea.

As for "dirt", thanks for bringing that to my attention, I will try to change it someway, and/or give it a twist, so it differs.