Bumaro and Ion sat at a table / Discussion

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SunnyClockwork 27 Jul 2017 12:56

Featuring Buamro and the ineffectiveness of Sarkicism. This is obviously just a unholy abomination joke tale.

Great thanks to Metaphysician, Modern_Erasmus, Perelka_L, and Lex1nat0r who read this mess and expressed their respective opinion on it.

Derdekeas is a Mekhanite, who is Metaphysician's character, but haven't really appeared in skips/tales yet. I think.

(Okay I apparently typed the Mekhanite's name wrong, now fixed.)

Update: Now that there is a Nadox & Derdekeas tale, I added a link :P

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Flawed 27 Jul 2017 13:08

At first I thought this was the Mek/Sar love story you proposed, but holy crap this is even better. It was hilarious seeing the clumsiness and sensitivity of a high level Sarkite, coupled with Bumaro's calm and mocking demeanor XD

Obviously, +1.

ChaoSera 27 Jul 2017 13:21

I've said it in chat and I'll say it here. This is an awful tale. You're awful. Everything is awful. But I can appreciate a high-quality shitpost.

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Take your upvote and get out of my sight.

SunnyClockwork 27 Jul 2017 13:25

I'm glad we can agree on this :D I shall now disappear into the distance with my upvote <3

Fingo7 27 Jul 2017 13:42

Ion is portrayed in such a great way here, you can't help but want to pat him and say "there, there" when he breaks his arm. Great work +1

Metaphysician 27 Jul 2017 17:11

Made me laugh!

Derekeas (the name comes from Gnostic scripture, specifically The Paraphrase of Shem), for context, is a figure in a draft I never finished that involved Nadox. A Byzantine era Mekhanite who encounters Nadox and faces the Klavigar in battle, eventually the two laugh at the absurdity of it all as it goes on for days, and begin to travel the world together as Nadox tragically searches for a way to prevent Yaldabaoth's inevitable return to consume the life it had sown long ago.

Keep up the good work Sunny!

SpookyPizza 27 Jul 2017 17:13

The mental images this tale gave me are just too damn good.

+1

SpectralDragon 29 Jul 2017 03:31

oh my god

take your upvote and reflect on what you've done

SunnyClockwork 29 Jul 2017 05:54

I'm exploring new boundaries of Sarkicism of course <3

Decibelles 29 Jul 2017 03:41

Wasn't too funny for my tastes. Also, the sort of dialog (the repeatedness of "said" and how stilted they felt to me at times) put me off of it. And I also thought it could have served to be longer? Still, not a bad concept for a tale.

SunnyClockwork 29 Jul 2017 05:49

Thanks for the feedback! And yeah that's fair and I can see those problems.

I kind of wrote this when it was super late and my brain was functioning in weird ways, and as I come back to this I can't seem to get back into that train of thoughts again. So I posted it mostly as it is.

Dr Cuihmne 12 Sep 2019 20:12

I can't tell whether your art is better, or this style of narrative vomiting is better.

Take my upvote and think about what you've done.