It's apperence reminds me of SCP-173-JP, which is a dinosaur made out of toys that makes you go into it cuz nostalgia.
pastarasta1 is quick-talking and often scheming
The dog's owner is probably the most pathetic guy I read on this website. Makes the guy that causes pizza deliveries to be weird look good. I would probably feel sad for this guy if he weren't in free housing because he doesn't want to be with others, plays with toy trucks at his age, and is eventually reduced to writing on walls and dying next to his dog's grave. This guy could use a suitable backstory for how he came to be. Maybe a tale?
Pretty darn good. The only issue I noticed is "span" in the last test log should be "spun". Other than that, it's a good read and conveys a story well. +1 for you.
"Span" is uncommon but it's a valid past tense of spin.
It's sort of like the shone/shined thing, where there are two valid forms and you'll see people argue for hours on which one is the "correct" one *cough*shone*cough* and which is the abomination unto language *cough*shined*cough*.
Less 'uncommon' and more 'archaic'. It's a 19th century sorta thing, and unless you're invoking an old-timey sorta feel, you should use 'spun' every time. I've personally never seen or heard 'span' used in real conversation.
if your reading this your gay
It was all ok and working until the buttplug.
Then my mind went 'oh, damn. Sex toys -are- toys…'
Read the result and now I can't stop laughing at a dogtail buttplug actually wagging with no secondary intention XD
The idea is ok, but I personally can't stand "crazy-talk" diaries anymore when the article doesn't back it up with a cool explanation. It has become a kind of crutch some skips use. Sort of like a "get out of a dialogue/interrogation/origin story free" card. Lazy and unoriginal. I would just remove that whole segment and come up with something else.
Downvoted.
