You have my attention. The opening sequence of Diaghilev brewing coffee was fun, which made the cut to him being stuck in modern traffic all the more surprising. A solid introduction to the Alchemy Division; I look forward to seeing more.
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Enjoyed the draft, enjoyed the final version. Wider boundaries of weirdness is something to get excited about.
+1
Should have reserved this…
Special thanks go out to NineVolt, DrShaw, DrBleep, Lex1nat0r, Pedantique, Lily, Eris, and a dozen others who read some form of this, as well as my girlfriend Janelle for pushing me to pursue this.
This is part 1 of 5, of what's going to be the Alchemy Division series. This is also leading up to a 001 proposal involving the O5 council, the Alchemists, and the origins of the Foundation itself.
Stay Tuned!
He muttered a thank you to the Fulminous Aether, and a curse to Apple for short battery life.
+1.
"The Scarlet King was bucking his seal, and attempting to push back against Ruslav, and Adebayo."
Well… Shit.
In all seriousness, though, I think I'm going to like this. My favorite version of the Scarlet Bastard is the one in Dust and Blood, an unstoppable, eldritch terror born from the Library, seeking only to end all that is. Having him being semi-contained by the Foundation through the use of alchemy definitely fits in that narrative. Great work, +1
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