SCP-7789-J / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page SCP-7789-J.

Heyyyyyyyyyyyy!

SpookyPizza 19 Jun 2017 15:55

This is my first joke SCP! I hope you liked it and I hope you laughed.

List of possible titles:

- Phones and airplanes! Living together! Mass hysteria!

- Paper-cuts to the extreme.

- Phones + Airplanes = XK-Class scenario

- I hope these jokes didn't fly over your head.

- This article won't fly.

- All these jokes are just plane bad.

Thanks to everyone who gave me feedback on this! You're all heroes!

Last edited on 25 Jun 2017 09:06 by SpookyPizza Show more

DrMagnus 19 Jun 2017 16:00

This article has been brought to you by Delta Air Lines. Please don't use your fucking phones during take-off or landing.

This is what made me go "Heh".

Eol Kredik 19 Jun 2017 17:56

I was going to downvote — until I read that line.

darth dxVxb 20 Jun 2017 20:31

I concur

frostbyt 03 Dec 2017 12:13

Yeah, me too

TL333s 19 Jun 2017 23:54

I had not a single reaction to this article while reading it. Well, other than noting that "on airplane mode" in this context doesn't quite work; "in" should be the preposition in all cases other than "forcibly set (to)". I mean, that reads better to me at least.

AgentWilson 10 Oct 2017 21:00

I have been noticing an increasing number of used of the word "on" when "in" or "to" would be more appropriate. I am not sure if this is because the individuals who wrote those things are non-native, or if it's an emerging shift in language with the younger folk.

WarpZone 23 Dec 2017 00:07

Either way, we can agree that the SCP Foundation's documents are probably prepared by a fluent speaker who's too old to own a fidget spinner, right?

WarpZone 22 Dec 2017 12:49

My reaction was:

Sigh, "Really?" And Additional Actions Articulating Annoyance About Advanced Alliteration Abutting Article About Anomalous Aircraft, or SRAAAAAAAAAAAAA.

+1

Last edited on 23 Dec 2017 02:11 by WarpZone Show more

DeRockProject 26 Jan 2018 11:14

I actually skipped a bit and started reading from what happens when SCP-7789-J is activated (without reading what causes it), and my god it was actually pretty disturbing, made me think why a seemingly real skip was in the jokes section.

Then I burst out laughing when I went back up to read what caused all this.

So what I'm saying is, maybe we could change this article to make the phone more of a punchline than it is at the moment? Mention what causes activation later in the article.

Last edited on 06 Feb 2018 05:03 by DeRockProject Show more