a wish that got granted, and noone seems to think its weird, exept for the people who "know better".
with a corporation that grants wishes? +1
original i like it
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a wish that got granted, and noone seems to think its weird, exept for the people who "know better".
with a corporation that grants wishes? +1
original i like it
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I hope it becomes a new GoI. It would make for some good scips
that it would indeed, it'd be very interesting to see how itd go
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The final addendum turns this from a creepy and surreal setting into "oh, a corporation did it", which is massively boring.
At least it didn't do the old "a reality bender did it" twistaroo.
pastarasta1 is quick-talking and often scheming
Shooting Star sounds like the Wondertainment of academic consultants.
But hey, if the kids are learning…
For me, the reveal at the end did not detract from the creepy and surreal quality. We don't know who is behind Shooting Star, or where they're getting their staffing from.
Yeah the Stop It and the whole message sounded like a veiled threat, and it was pretty neat how very all-smiles they were while doing it.
Necropost but I figured it was something I would've said anyway, so it might as well have been put here where it also complements the other view.
I don't really care that much.
The incident report, I feel, would have been the best place to leave off. Hesitant upvote regardless, because it was still pretty good overall.
Though a lot of people seem to not like Final Notes, I still think "Stop it" is funny. It gives no insight as to why SSI would do anything it does. It only lets the Foundation know that the awareness of each others influence is mutual. Not even a shitty dad can stop Shooting Star Inc.
I think the "Stop it" might have an undercurrents of "We'll mess you up something shocking if you don't."
It's something that I haven't seen here before, and for that, it gets a +1.
I love cute skips, and this one was very cute. I love exploring the implications of the cartoon school. Shooting Star Inc. was a nice touch, and the "Stop it" at the end was very jarring, and made for a good "punchline." +1
Shooting Star School sound like an anime fanfiction with fantasy genre, which I admit, is the reason why I find this to be extraordinary unique. And I clicked, and I read, and it's not really that disappointing. I like the log that explain how it all happens. Sound pretty sweet to me. It get me hooked.
But what essentially makes me think this is legit dark and had its quality, is that "stop it" warning note from the Shooting Star Inc.
+1