Downvoting it now, so it gets a rewrite. The concept is good, but some things are off here.
First, the entities didn't needed to be identified in blue. That seemed at first to play a role later, but did not. By the way, there is no visual cue as to the position of a Sarkicist in the religion, so identifying the Karcist and Võlutaar just by reviewing the feed seems to not be a thing. If you want, just make as you did with the Halkost and spell it out "live" in the log.
Second, the description of the area is too confusing. I have no clear idea of what the superimposed 5 meters perimeter looks like, if there is a cave or not, how you are supposed to interact with the anomaly, and even how things were during the exploration. That all need a heavy rework just to make things simpler to understand.
Third, as others pointed, it just feels unfinished. I don't think the Foundation have reason to shut down new explorations, by the way, neither does it really seems to be keter at all. You don't need to actually describe further efforts to understand and document the anomaly, but just implying that it is intended to be explored soon could be enough, if you don't want to extend it.
Last, but not least, I'm really missing more skips with visual addenda lately, and this one seems perfect for this. You get a photo of the bay and we have it. Nowadays it seems that only format screws get to have images.
