SCP-2258 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page SCP-2258.

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Shaggydredlocks 31 Dec 2016 02:16

Loved this as a draft, love it here. Cute, and charming as hell. +1.

rockyred9 31 Dec 2016 04:59

I forgot to thank you. Thanks for the critique you provided by private message!

MrWrong 31 Dec 2016 02:22

While I do enjoy the extent (and futility) of David the balloon's escape attempts, the SCP is multiple balloons. What about the rest of the balloons? This feels to be a big plot hole. If the article focused on that one balloon from the get-go, it would be a non-issue. But do other sentient balloons feel the same way? Do they empathise their friend? Do they help David? Do they hate David?

Thus, I think the other balloons should also be accounted for in the article beyond broad mentions and definitions.

rockyred9 31 Dec 2016 02:45

If you read the Incident Logs, you'll notice that ALL of SCP-2258 is participating in the escape, not just David. So obviously they all feel the same way. I'm glad you like the escape attempts!

MrWrong 31 Dec 2016 03:04

And this is why I hate collective nouns…

rockyred9 31 Dec 2016 02:35

My first SCP! Hope you guys like it! Huge thanks to (in no particular order) Scorpion451, Petrograd, psul, Comparing Realities, Decibelles, Communism will win, and everyone else who commented on the drafts in the forums.

Westrin 31 Dec 2016 02:38

Seconding dredlocks, this is incredibly cute

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ProcyonLotor 31 Dec 2016 02:51

I love this, it's absolutely adorable.

kinchtheknifeblade 31 Dec 2016 02:54

I would have liked to see what these balloons sound like when they're despondent, but beyond that, I'm really into this. It's Fun with a capital F.

MayD 31 Dec 2016 02:57

This is fantastic, and is 100% genuinely adorable.

Taffeta 31 Dec 2016 03:13

Anything that makes me contemplate the concept of "helium dependency" is typically worth an upvote.

DrBleep 31 Dec 2016 03:15

If I could upvote twice, I would. +1

minmin 31 Dec 2016 04:46

:) this is good and pure and is a shining example of all things right in the world

Have your upvote.

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