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Happy Holidays, Zyn!

Tyumen 29 Dec 2020 20:20

Home, is where I want to be
But I guess I'm already there
I come home, she lifted up her wings
I guess that this must be the place

~David Byrne, "This Must Be the Place"

This tale is my attempt at emulating the style of Zyn's original Kiryu Labs series — probably one of the best early series on this site, propped up by Zyn's talent for writing heartwarming, touching stories with just the right balance between humour and heartfelt emotion. I hope I did Kiryu Labs justice with this.

Thanks to VoidLady, not_a_seagull, and Its a Bad Idea for helping me revise and edit this tale, and special thanks to Zyn for all that she does to help this community thrive. Have a wonderful New Year.

Zyn 29 Dec 2020 20:25

Happy Holidays and best wishes for the upcoming New Year!

Thank you very much to Tyumen for writing such a lovely tale! The interactions between the Kiryu Labs characters were spot-on and I loved the nature of the anomalous item of interest. Just the kind of heartwarming read I needed during the end of this unusual, chaotic year.

Wholehearted +1!

+1

VoidLady 29 Dec 2020 20:25

Love this, love the title. I did notice you're missing a few periods under the final collapsible, however.

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It's looking up or looking down!

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DarkStuff 29 Dec 2020 20:45

My review from the Art Exchange forum:

Awww. This is a really sweet tale in which the members of Kiryu labs unwittingly return something very important to someone back to them in their time of need. It's very heartwarming, and perfect for the season.

Nothing to add. +1

daviiid 30 Dec 2020 15:35

This was a really sweet read. Not much to add apart from that, honestly, beyond seconding the comments before me- heartwarming tale, and a much-needed bit of positivity. Easy +1!