Scp idea

Scp idea

Jomono8 25 Nov 2020 02:28

Seeking Greenlights: Yes

Page Type: SCP Article

Elevator Pitch: A Scp that is being manipulated by the foundation

Central Narrative: A Scp that can construct objects and buildings, as time past the Scp becomes more skilled and deformed.

Hook/Attention-Grabber: The Scp is someone with a weak mind, and is being studied by two doctors, Dr. Erik and Dr. Simon, Dr. Erik is sympathetic with the Scp and threats him like a "son" as for Dr. Simon he is a very serious man , that will do extreme actions for the foundation

Additional Notes: I want a better understanding of how to organize the files and how to write a narrative that the reader will understand and enjoy, and is not finished, half of the Scp Article is done by now.

Re: Scp idea

JamaisJ 25 Nov 2020 17:42

1) I like the psychological angle, as it looks like the guy is torn between the two researchers and the conflict in their styles is causing problems.

2) Unless you're ready to play up the Greek tragedy this is sure to become, you may want to make the SCP more of an item than an actual human. Otherwise this could get away from you.

Re: Scp idea

Jomono8 25 Nov 2020 18:16

I don't think it's becoming an Greek Tragedy, I'm trying to do a article similar to 4051 but without the "hero" thing, and if it was an item it would pretty boring, and Dr. Erik perspective would be useless, but thanks for the criticism.