Due to lack of post on this article, I'm reviewing to bring this back up to the first page.
Right away, this is interesting. I personally am not an avid tale reader, but this seems interesting and unique. Some interesting cross-links would suit this article nicely(don't just cross-link series 1 plz). However, it'd be better if you only focused on one site, as it would make the reader less confused when the sites switched. Your hook seems ight, so I'll skip over that. My biggest problem is the lack of detail of the tale itself. If you have a sandbox, I'd love to see it. However, even here, you need to provide even at least brief detail of the plans you have to take with the tale, such as a doctor, and some of the anomalous injuries that'll be tended.
PM me for re-review, good luck and happy writing!
~Yellow